Recent Comments

Moose
2/20/18, 12:34 AM
A new story by the legend! Awesome stuff!
trytoknowyou@gmail.com
2/20/18, 12:10 AM
Some people on here are just anonymous assholes. Ignore them, they don't contribute anything to site but vitriol.
Anonymous
2/19/18, 11:19 PM
Great work@
Anonymous
2/19/18, 11:09 PM
Thanks, I really appreciate your encouragement. I have noticed some good advice from some of these comments and I should review how I'm writing my stories. I thought that always using the Navy Seal instead of attaching a name to him was a good idea. I was wrong. As suggested, using shorter sentence would be better also. I'm opened to constructive comments but my intends was not to be destroyed by some guys. We all face already too much stress in our lives. I don't need to add more to it. When someone doesn't like something, there is always a good way to comment and it is called 'savoir vivre'. Unfortunately, some of you does not have any.
Anonymous
2/19/18, 10:45 PM
While the writing was clumsy there was enough of the story to come through to understand. A lot of writers have trouble transferring their ideas to paper. Many times they are already thinking about the ending when they are just starting the story and forget to add the details up front. It was/is an intriguing story with enough of what I found sexual to want to read more ! I hope you don't give up. Thank you for your courage to post a story.
Anonymous
2/19/18, 10:10 PM
Creative story. The 'familiarity' of the app hypnotizes the user so that he doesn't even realize what he's doing. It would be great if you could really make money like that for a 'show' !
Anonymous
2/19/18, 10:10 PM
I spend a lot of energy and hours to have something that I was expecting other to enjoy. I was wrong. I will keep my story for me. Sorry to have you lost your time. It will nto happened again. Regards.
MalSkin
2/19/18, 7:20 PM
guys if you look at this person's posts you will see that English is not his first language...yes it was confusing but he does have the balls to write
Anonymous
2/19/18, 7:02 PM
The story is lost in some of the worst writing. Did you even read what you were posting?
Anonymous
2/19/18, 7:01 PM
So fucking hot!!! I'm still hard.