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7/27/24, 8:03 AM
Great start.
7/27/24, 7:41 AM
Sign me up.
7/27/24, 6:48 AM
Wow...I never realized I needed s Ra's story like this. It's amazing. Can you give a sense of how much more is coming? I know you work by commission, so I was wondering what was ordered and how long the wait might be?

7/27/24, 6:50 AM
@[Enthralledo](/user/show/10022568) This will be huge, the commissioner, who is a great guy, wants the whole DC universe taken down :)

7/27/24, 6:56 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) Wow! I can't wait and thanks for the writing. Think we might get new chapters once a week? Month? Always good to know!

7/27/24, 6:57 AM
@[Enthralledo](/user/show/10022568) The stories are posted anywhere from a month or more on here, they are posted first at https://www.launchpass.com/Jackparker2001/https-jackparker-space for subscribers. And thanks for the kind words!

7/27/24, 7:07 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) Cool, are there more Ra's chapters there now?

7/27/24, 7:11 AM
@[Enthralledo](/user/show/10022568) Now right now there is a new Eden chapter. a collected copy of Top Dawg and the next Johnny chapters is being written now. Raj is up after. the chapters there are in PDF form and include images like these https://drive.google.com/file/d/10ZyDOyBQav8GaslQd-EZZx21RZqJOmXi/view?usp=sharing and this https://drive.google.com/file/d/1SuPCnSckD-IeMvIdGFOaLC5VkFP8O2Yv/view?usp=sharing
7/27/24, 6:07 AM
Amazingly hot! You’re so good at putting us in the mind of that jock, and making all those tiny steps in rationalizing his new ass obsession into fucking his roommate believable and sexy. I’m hooked!
Jul 27, 2024
7/27/24, 6:03 AM
Very amusing! All hail our analien overlords :satisfied:
pindikpatt
7/27/24, 5:11 AM
Love your story and can't wait for more. keep it up Author.
7/27/24, 4:26 AM
It's very hot. I wonder how far robotization will go and how reversible it is)
Anonymous
7/27/24, 4:22 AM
A couple of things threw me off.. at the beginning of the story it was mentioned the order of the drugs was the drink, then the injection and lastly suppositories as often as needed, however later in the story the last two were reversed…not a huge deal though. But out of curiosity I am really wondering what the last two drugs actually do? VERY awesome story though, would love to see what is done to Seth and what the two are made to do/believe together. I would NOT mind a sequel or five
7/27/24, 3:47 AM
This was such a fun concept, would love to see a bit more of what happens next.
Anonymous
7/27/24, 3:02 AM
Great story, makes me so very turned on