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8/7/24, 2:39 AM
It's a little ironic. This all started because of the Grandmaster's actions. He decided to fake Collin's death in an attempt to protect him from the Wolf King and his family, and by extension protect the kingdom and the Order of the Holy Dawn, but the plan ended up backfiring and only resulted in his downfall. It's very similar to Greek myths, where when trying to avoid destiny, the characters only end up making it happen. I love this type of plot. I just feel a little sorry for Collin. He sacrificed so much to keep his family safe, and it was all for nothing. His father was captured by demons, and he didn't even know it, and all the people he considers family have been corrupted and turned into malicious demons who want to corrupt him too. Well, he still has his boyfriend, Eddie, but something tells me that soon he will also meet his own downfall on this mission he was sent on. I hope that at least in the end Collin can be with his family, even if in a totally perverted and incestuous way.

Pcm
8/7/24, 5:04 PM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) I mean, can you blame the Grandmaster? From his perspective, faking Collin's death is the best course of action. The irony is indeed delicious. It seems that there is a split between people wanting Collin toe scape and wanting him to succumb (just like with Gil)...most interesting. I hooe that you like Eddie! The next chapter will be all about him!
8/7/24, 3:14 PM
I always enjoy your stories. I wish I could live in this rubber world you created. Though this chapter brings up a question: what about unwilling/forced conversions. Such as Justin. Call me devious but seeing him aware and conscious again just before he gets converted would have been hawt. Seeing the raw emotion on his face as he tries to get away while the rubber hood gets closer and seals him away.
8/7/24, 1:45 PM
This is amazing. Would love a second part.
8/7/24, 1:39 PM
Great story!
8/7/24, 1:24 PM
Nice beginning. I look forward to more
8/7/24, 12:12 PM
Very fresh story themes and wonderful hypnosis process, I like it very much
8/7/24, 12:11 PM
WOW! WOW! I love this story. It is so so good and I love Dr Simonson too! He is really perfect. I love his man chin and his smooth skin and his clever antics! I cannot wait for 730 pm!
Anonymous
8/7/24, 9:10 AM
This whole story is AI junk with no substance
8/7/24, 7:49 AM
Really good
Anonymous
8/7/24, 7:11 AM
Didn’t even finish the first chapter. Obviously AI-generated. Not worth reading the rest of the story. Should label a story as AI in the tags or description and not try to deceive your readers and waste their time.