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Jul 7, 2024
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/7/24, 4:33 AM
Damn! Hot story! Love being mindless, totally controlled and dependently obedient!
Anonymous
7/7/24, 4:04 AM
Oh. My. God. I will be checking this page every day for the next and future installments
7/7/24, 3:45 AM
Achieving maximum efficiency and productivity cap'n daddy The best part is how entertainment continues to contribute to economic parts of the universe 😂
7/7/24, 3:39 AM
I also grew to like Aaron but mainly because I feel similar to him and wish something like this could happen to me 🤣
7/7/24, 3:38 AM
I read this a few weeks ago, but this was fascinating to read. This is also likely the first I read from you, I encountered from someone's lists
7/7/24, 3:36 AM
I enjoyed this. each time I wondered how are things gonna continue falling apart, you kept showing more :D
7/7/24, 3:26 AM
I recognize this isn't the most recent work -- i generally love sci fi (and I think the author does too). There's just a bit much of the gadgets at first. But the story enters the alternating phase where the story feels like it is going. I enjoyed the confusing jumps. I also watched the first season of altered carbon :) At first I thought this would have some body swapping that relates to disguises, but I like where you took it nonetheless
7/7/24, 2:53 AM
Hoping for more
7/6/24, 11:38 PM
Can we please have a part 2 of this story! Pretty please sir!
Anonymous
7/6/24, 11:38 PM
Fun start, I can’t wait to see where this goes!