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6/29/24, 9:06 AM
A cruel but nevertheless hot story... but did I get it right, Dan isn't aware when he's tranced? He doesn't get to enjoy his being a dumb slut? So cruel...

6/29/24, 5:07 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Its very cruel! One day I might write Elliot finally getting his comeuppance, though. ;)
6/29/24, 6:16 AM
Great story, I loved it!

6/29/24, 5:06 PM
@[Redtrojan1987](/user/show/1770116) I am glad you liked it :D
6/29/24, 4:45 PM
Hey, Amul. Love your unique take to the genre. Hoping for a follow-up to the story.
Muscle-Flex
6/29/24, 4:42 PM
This was a lot of fun. The e-mail format was entertaining and you did a really good job of using that to let us see into Dan's mind. I liked the AI pictures of Sean/Mike. And, of course, the twist at the end was an enjoyable mixture of hot and sweet.
6/29/24, 4:39 PM
Fuck just imagining all those super studs lying in bed afterwards trying to jerk off but they can't help imagining how good it felt making love to their proteges, brains rewired from the blasts of pleasure from the mind blowing fuck while parasite removed all their mental defenses.
6/29/24, 2:40 PM
You've offered to spoil the ultimate ending for people who were afraid of Brian, and I decided not to ask, despite feeling like the story is leading to Brian acquiring too much power. Ironic that the only time the story gave me hope re: Brian is with something that's even darker. Brian's wish at the end of last chapter really scared me, but with the three non-brainwashed good guys saying no, and with Riley's abilities (and addictive pre-cum), I'm getting hopeful (if the following chapters crushes me, please do it gently). Phenomenal series so far.
6/29/24, 2:25 PM
Great story excited for part 2??
6/29/24, 1:51 PM
Another chapter for us to enjoy. You have us all in your power, Jack.
6/29/24, 11:42 AM
getting interesting, the mark one cyborgs have started to be rounded up, for an upgrade, maybe?
10/26/23, 12:25 AM
This deserves more love than it seems to have gotten! Cuckolding is very much not my kink, but you made it highly erotic here, man.

6/29/24, 11:24 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) extremely erotic...so good