Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/18/24, 4:15 AM
I felt the "cheating" part was out of line for the app. Casey legit found a loophole. The app should've been pouty, but it should've played fair. If it isn't playing fair, the story twists from being a challenge for your main character to manage and possibly overcome to simply wish-fulfillment sadism. For me, it completely removes the interesting part of the story: the game to be played.

Anonymous
5/18/24, 10:01 AM
@Anonymous I fully agre with this, the phrasing didn't say it had to stay up or how he had to do it, just that he had to post something sexually revealing online, hell he could've done it with a burner or anonymously and it'd be within the rules but with him not being able to think or have the time that wouldn't have worked.

5/18/24, 10:19 AM
@Anonymous I'm also disappointed he lost the challenge, but I haven't thought of it like that. Learning how to beat the app in its own game could be an interesting development that still offer hot scenarios while not leaving Casey as a "punching bag" for the app and its developers.

6/17/24, 3:42 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) I very honestly didn't think this would be an issue, hm! Hopefully the resolution of why this is there is satisfying, in the end.
5/18/24, 2:12 AM
absolutely loved this chapter. fuck.

6/17/24, 3:41 PM
@[SwimJock](/user/show/39947) Your interest keeps me writing. Thanks!
5/18/24, 1:21 AM
O M fucking G!! 🤩

6/17/24, 3:41 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) TY! ;)
Muscle-Flex
6/16/24, 11:48 PM
Wow! That was a great seduction scene. Looks to me like Jacob has plans for his clueless buddy. I'm glad to see that another chapter is coming. This story is off to a great start!

6/17/24, 2:54 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Thank you! Both Jacob and I have a lot of plans for David. I've got at least a few different stories I want to tell with these two.
6/17/24, 1:50 PM
Looking at the tags, I have strong suspicions about who the writer is. Unless it's a first-time entry. We get a few of those every contest. Very hot and fun to read, in any case.💚 Would love a follow-up some day.
6/17/24, 12:28 PM
I feel like this story could benefit from a change of perspective in future chapters. You could pick up the narrative a couple of weeks later with a different focalizing character--perhaps someone who'd be naturally inclined to investigate, like an MI6 agent or one of Frank's colleagues on the police force--and have them gradually learn about the growing cyborg army. That would give the story an element of suspense that it's currently lacking; right now, it feels like nearly every part of the story follows these beats: "Tom tells us the next component of his plan... that plan goes off without a hitch." So even though I love the premise, and I think there's some interesting characterization, I'm finding it hard to get invested in the story itself.

6/17/24, 12:35 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Funny you should say that, because that's exactly the kind of thing I have in mind for chapter 4, which I'm just editing now and should be available in a few hours.
Jun 15, 2024
6/17/24, 10:10 AM
damn hot!!
JX
6/8/24, 6:29 PM
update soon?

6/9/24, 2:30 PM
@JX Hi. I'm only half way for the next chapter. Seems like I'll be releasing Ch.18 first before the Ch.2 of Supercop. It might take a few weeks though.

JX
6/17/24, 9:57 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Great! can’t wait to see what happens next and Dexter’s new dynamic having a mansion all to himself!
6/17/24, 2:53 AM
That corndog part was everything for me 😂🥵

Hypno-boy
6/17/24, 9:50 AM
@[GemGemmini](/user/show/351392) lol
6/17/24, 7:19 AM
I love the slow seductive power shift. Once Alex started developing a crush on David, became obligated to David for his tutoring, and then humiliated by being caught wearing David's preppy clothes, his fate was pretty much sealed. Still i need to experience the complete power shift and David's total control, so please keep up with this story! If it pleases you, I'll even wear preppy clothes to be able to read more!