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6/11/24, 7:11 AM
I'd buy that cock 🐽🥵🤤
6/11/24, 5:57 AM
Absolutely phenomenal. I wasn't sure about the highly decorative choice in vocabulary at first but it definitely served well to illustrate the mental state of the protagonist.
HypnoMutt
6/8/24, 10:18 AM
Amazing, fun, compelling, twisted... loving every word. How are you managing to keep the "wish matrix" consistent? Every chapter brings new layers of conditions that interact in complex ways with every wish that's come before - do you have a process chart or a guide that you're using, or are you working it out as you write? (If you don't want to discuss trade secrets, understandable, but if you want to share in the forum or the Discord chat, I'd love to know more - thanks!)

6/8/24, 1:29 PM
@HypnoMutt Lol. The only problem with revealing the 'magic' behind my writing process is revealing that there isn't much magic. Like most of my stories, this one started as late-night or early-morning daydreams. The stories I tell myself before I go to bed or as I'm waking up. I mentally wrote and re-wrote key scenes and hot scenes (initial wishes, Tyler + Brian's first sex scene, Joe + Noah's endless sex, the Brits in the bathroom, a few others like the ending) countless times just in my head. Then, when I decided to actually start writing it down instead of daydreaming about it, I created a notes file in Google where I fleshed out character names (everyone is nameless in my head until I start writing) and created a day-by-day wish tracker. I wrote down every day and every character's name, and I knew, based on the ending, which wishes *needed* to happen. The initial horny/uninhibited/gay/obedience/knowledge wishes, Joe's wish for endless sex as an excuse for them to not immediately reverse the gay wish, Tyler's wish for Javi to have a physical form this chapter, a few more to come. Then I filled in the blanks in my list with fun and sometimes-twisted sex wishes I wanted to write into scenes. Then I filled in the scenes. Several of my favorite scenes were not planned and happened organically. The initial Mateo and Ramon scene with Tyler, for example, was me creating a contrast to how an empathetic person would use the seduction wish vs Brian and the Brits (which I had planned from the start), but then I ended up loving those characters. As I actually wrote the wishes, I replaced my general "Brian wishes to be able to seduce anyone" in my notes with the exact words. Now I just copy/paste that part of my notes to the end of every chapter to share with you guys.

6/11/24, 5:51 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Thanks so much for this insight into your process and for taking the time to write! Very informative - and inspiring :)
6/11/24, 5:14 AM
Thanks man! It's great to have you back. Please, continue. You're a great writer and I really enjoy it.
6/11/24, 4:47 AM
This is awesome.
6/11/24, 4:43 AM
Welcome back! (I guess, since this is my first time reading your story. Just new reader here) Anyway, love the story concept and it is very hot. Hope you continue updating it. Maybe you could add Chris and Will to the mix.
6/11/24, 4:35 AM
What a treat! Surprised that I hadn't seen any of your previous chapters before today.. my good fortune to read them all in one sitting! This is brilliant, I'm hooked. Thank you!
thesaxcat
6/11/24, 1:58 AM
please, please PLEASE keep going!
Anonymous
6/11/24, 1:26 AM
This is exactly the kind of story I would have loved reading back in the old NCMC days. A man taken and ruined by his lust and fantasies, trapped in a prison of his own making as a dumb muscle beast and loving every minute of his degradation and humiliation
Anon Y. Mouse
6/10/24, 10:31 PM
I tried to leave a comment last night and not sure if it went into moderation or it was eaten because I hit the wrong button. I don't usually comment here and I'm trying to do it anonly. In fact I'm a prude who just likes transformation stories, not porn or sex and fiddly bits and such. I also don't like incest stories. (The medieval and fantasy elements helped here... and maybe just because I like wolfmen and minotaurs a bit). But I really enjoyed this, due to the writing and characterization and genuine buildup. I liked the fact that Rudy, the licentious one, seemed more aware of their being corrupted (and reveled in it) than most of the others (including Gil, even at the end). I had my own headcanon of Ruby's ending and turning, which the 50 years future may alter a little, but... After weeks or months or a year, however long it takes, gradual communication from Rudy and Gil plus her own loneliness and isolation... But for Ruby to either just give in or decide to join, apart from death being the only option and the logic that Anon presents, I'm thinking a) Rudolf apologizes for his tirade and accusations, right when Ruby tried to tell him he was still the man she loved underneath it all... It was the rage and exhiliration and lust and anger, and even though corrupted and enjoying it, Rudy assesses himself and that Ruby's not wrong, he does still love her tenderly... and Gilbert realizes that turning her right away as he planned wouldn't have been allowing her the agency which he himself had been granted by his brothers, to make the call. Whatever the outcome after, I feel like that would have been part of it... and then because I don't and can't write the explicit sex stuff, I just picture sloppy cartoony wolfish triple kissing with tongues or whatever.

Pcm
6/11/24, 12:57 AM
@Anon Y. Mouse Yes, it is somewhat sifficult searching for transformation stories without erotic elements. I tgink something has to do with the completion of bodily change is likened to orgasm or such. Yeah, Rudy is always horny. I think he likes seeing his father and brothers becoming as horny as he is. Gil himself felt that he was doing "the right thing" at the moment, so you can say that he was somewhat oblivious to the insidious nature of his corruption. I'm genuinely surprised that people are rooting for Ruby to get her happy ending! Thabk you for following my work!