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6/8/24, 6:53 PM
so this is why Colin's death was faked, I wonder how his family would react to the WHY he has to leave them, it complicates things, a lot also, is the Primal Beast a demon too?

Anon
6/8/24, 9:49 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Honestly, I really doubt it. The demons seem to work by being a subversion of eastern chivalry, but the beasts are a re-emphasizing of traditional western values. They may lead to similar things, but they seem to be different factions because they at their cores stand for very different things- the demons from what we can tell have nothing of the mythology we have seen in knightly duties. And they aren't the only ones present- the abyss and the arboreal are mentioned in the chapter prior to this I believe. I don't believe any of them really get along- and probably see each other as enemies and competitors for human souls. Something like the chaos gods of warhammer.

6/8/24, 9:54 PM
@[Anon](/user/show/10049352) makes sense, maybe the demons would go against the West if they found they killed/forced colin to fake his death, they are going to zero in in them once ther are done with the Esat, if they win, of course

Anon
6/8/24, 10:00 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I wouldn't even say might- if they find out the real reason for the order putting out the fake death was because there was a real threat from the west they are going to jump all over that and push for an defensive attack- if they wind up taking over theyll want to defend their territory. William is enraged right now at the king- if he realizes the order tricked him to go after the wrong target he's going to go after the right one in anger tenfold. That probably won't stop him from gunning the order down- Daniel likely overworked him based on the conversation in chapter 2 in knightly duties, and it's clear the man has issues thanks to his death and reincarnation. It's entirely possible him hyperfocusing on the east will leave him blindsided when the demons strike. But for now, they'll likely focus on the order- unless Collin meets up with them and tells them what's going on I can't see them doing anything else. And even if he does they'll probably keep converting people because they'd think humans wouldn't be enough to stave off the beasts or they'd get converted. It'd be a horrible fate of either get turned into a demon, get invaded by beastfolk or die a human. Not to mention, if the westerners were able to literally infiltrate the royal palace and nearly make off with the heir, it's likely the border regions are filled with western sympathizers. There's possibly going to be a western invasion, a border region Civil War between eastern loyalists and western sympathizers, mass transformation events and ambushes, and the eastern demon outbreaks/insurgency. This isn't even considering humans panicking, witch hunts and general political chaos. Honestly if I was in this universe I'd be taking a ship very far away from either of these regions. Realistically this would be terrifying to live through. The order is screwed regardless. They already have low manpower thanks to the disaster fifty years ago- things are probably going to go south really fast.

6/8/24, 10:07 PM
@Anon that would be terrifying, I think Colin may at least try to talk William into focusing on the West first, as they are a treat to both of them, as they are brothers, he is also on the kill list, and that may give Colin the time to find a way to help his family
6/7/24, 9:16 AM
Good second chapter! I had mixed feelings about Chapter 1, because I loved the premise but had trouble telling the boys apart, since they were all exchanging bitchy repartee like young gays who'd watched too much Drag Race. But now I think the characters are emerging a bit more clearly. I just hope the resort starts messing with their minds a little more in Chapter 3!

6/7/24, 9:44 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) We'll see :sweat_smile: Thanks for the feedback, i wanted to focus a bit more on characterization this chapter so i'm glad that came through!

6/8/24, 8:41 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) I agree! Really enjoying this one so far.

6/8/24, 9:22 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) No pressure then :rofl: A slow burn and not cruel, the norismo special. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
6/8/24, 9:47 AM
When is the brother coming into the picture? Can’t wait to see what happens to him.

6/8/24, 9:05 PM
@[tanners92](/user/show/963694) Right now I'm not planning on Peter coming in till Monday! But I've got big plans for these two for Sunday.
6/8/24, 8:44 AM
I love this story, I must have one of the tags blocked so I have to search it out manually but it's always worth it. Looking forward to eric's run, anything could happen, he could meet anyone...

6/8/24, 9:03 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Dang sorry about using a blocked tag! But it makes me happy to hear you're searching out this story. So glad you like it!
Anonymous
6/8/24, 8:31 PM
Utterly amazing story! Literally pushes all of my biggest buttons! Even the pussy thing, something I would normally not be into, works perfectly here! I want to be just like him! Dumb smooth muscle for labor that gets pleasure from the humiliation of my new reality.
6/8/24, 8:11 PM
I believed fully in the big jock guy being invulnerable. Quite a thrill to see an unbelievable in his bicep strung self turned boy toy.
6/8/24, 7:25 PM
I love reading when guys have to deal with having too much and this is a prime example of that. Leaking forward to more!
6/8/24, 5:25 PM
I honestly like multiple endings, part of me wants to see Brian lose, but the sub in me wants to see him win. Course I'm not the author and trust you got everything planned out and it'll be hot 🔥
6/8/24, 3:09 PM
This continues to be a lot of fun. It would be fun after the personality make over and the self-discovery, eventually, Skippy sits down to negotiate with Titan an ongoing relationship with the pack and his major requests are to keep up chastity and be stricter with discipline :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:
6/8/24, 3:09 PM
Would you ever update this