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Pcm
6/4/24, 3:15 PM
The gradual mental transformation is very well done! I like how Bruce slowly reverts from his confident self into a pliable good boy eager to obey and become like his daddy. The growing obliviousness as Bruce grows adore Grodd as his father is hot. The final completr loss of his humanity is the perfect way to cap off the story. Too bad that the new father and son never got to have a sexy time together.

6/4/24, 3:28 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Oh my gosh, thank you so much! :star_struck: I really did try to incorporate a style that could intimately detail the process of Bruce becoming mentally dominated and tried a crack at emulating Swizzington's style of expanded visual metaphor. As for the ending, I appreciate that you liked it! It's the roughest part, for sure, and I've been told by a few people that it could've taken another go. Honestly, I'd love to write a continuation some time to smooth it out and maybe add that "sexy time" :wink: if I get commissioned for it some day!

Pcm
6/4/24, 3:34 PM
@[Tom Gungy](/user/show/129727) I know that this is a commissoned work, but it really is too bad that the story won't be continued otherwise. It would be so hot for the new 'Bruce' to help his new father convert the Robins ( who are his sons, adopted and blood) into other Gorillas for their family. Maybe they could become his new little brothers? Bruce could help them diaper up. Or maybe Grodd could become a proud grandpa 1after all....
6/4/24, 2:51 PM
Wow! Always love reading stories where the big guy falls into submission. The pacing was kept it going. And how is submission was like a constant haze over his mind. Or how his only thoughts were of his new Master. His new gear suits him well. Though may I recommend having Mark in some rubber. If leather is for doms, then rubber and latex are for subs and slaves. Plus seeing his muscled body outlined in that stuff would be hawt. But either way, please keep going if you can.
Jun 3, 2024
Anonymous
6/4/24, 1:40 PM
You should continue this series but have the main character go through the app’s “introduction” and maybe have someone Zonk him

6/4/24, 1:45 PM
@Anonymous I'm down to write whatever I'm commissioned for! I certainly wouldn't mind adding to this one. I had a lot of fun with it!
Jun 3, 2024
6/3/24, 5:01 PM
Mean and hot! The humiliation’s well written.

6/4/24, 1:44 PM
@[Catalust](/user/show/920370) Thank you!
6/4/24, 11:13 AM
Great scene! Hope for more.
Alfred Mcgee
6/4/24, 1:52 AM
Do you have any plans to make some type of series? It would be amazing if the predator into a relationship with someone they could digest over and over and over again Leave

6/4/24, 9:12 AM
@Alfred Mcgee I have plans for a third chapter, but it will take some time to come out!
6/4/24, 6:02 AM
I have reread this epic; it gets better with multiple readings. I can hardly wait for the story's continuation.
6/4/24, 5:40 AM
I personally love how gross a character Brian is. That being said it would be a crime against humanity if he doesn’t get fucked in the ass at some point. oh how humiliating it will be for him.
Anonymous
5/31/24, 8:12 AM
Neptune is the Roman name for Poseidon which is a Greek name. Zeus is the Greek name for Jupiter in the Roman mythology. Mixing both is quite disturbing

6/4/24, 4:59 AM
@Anonymous And Shazam is an acronym for Solomon, Hercules, Atlas, Zeus, Achilles, and Mercury. I wouldn’t worry about it too much if the names of the gods used for the acronym are also mixed Greek & Roman.