I was so excited to see you uploaded a new chapter of this series! I loved the first one and read it over and over again. You always do a great job writing weight gain hypnosis stories! This new chapter was even hotter than the first. The pig and cow transformations were UNBELIEVABLY hot! And it was nice to get some backstory on The Trough and how the hypnosis stage show got started. Thanks so much for sharing this new chapter with us! Hope you upload the next one whenever you get a chance! (And since you’re updating stories, I selfishly hope you post a new chapter of “Revelations” at some point, lol. That was the first story I found of yours and really loved it!)

This was an amazing concept! I love the control, the outfits, the transformations, and of course the various gifts that both reward and punish! Glad he's getting some help and the consequences of failure are perfect. Best keep all our eyes peeled for mysterious gifts at the door!

There are so many wonderful lines in this chapter that firmly declare the nature of the growing connection between Marcus and Caleb, and more generally important aspects of all good Dom/sub and Master/slave relationships. "Because despite everything, despite the pain, the frustration, the cage, he’d never felt more alive. More used. More owned. More loved." “Your focus on your release weakens your worship. Only when you forget yourself completely — only when you exist for Me and My cock alone — will you become who you are meant to be.” "Marcus showed him, week after week, [...] the only thing that mattered: To honor Him with devotion. To serve Him selflessly, sweetly, and fully." One line by Marcus i adamantly refute is this one: “Service isn’t about your pleasure, faggot, it’s about Mine.” Personally this one line would weaken a D/s connection for me because it demonstrates that in spite of everything, Marcus is almost exclusively interested in his own pleasure. He seems to lack an understanding that submission, obedience, and especially service are all great sources of pleasure for any true submissive. To me it seems Marcus is training his slave to be empty, blank, emotionless, and unhesitatingly responsive. i think in this modern context both Dom and sub, Master and slave, need positive constructive experiences and outcomes from their relationship. They each complete the other. To be fair to the author getting to know someone deeply takes a lot of time and attention. There is also a lot in the story to indicate that love is a strong component of their connection. i like to believe that Marcus words often don't reflect his real and ultimate intent or feelings, that he does love and cherish his slave. Downplaying this concern is easy when so much of the story reflects the kind of D/s or M/s relationship i fantasize about. For that once again i thank the author for sharing his imagination and smooth writing skills which vividly describes these characters and their relationship. This story is definitely one of my favorites!

It varies by chapter which of these two annoys me more. Neither is likeable, you need Liam to be this stupid for the story but it just comes across as the special needs kid being bullied by a piece of shit jock.

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There are so many wonderful lines in this chapter that firmly declare the nature of the growing connection between Marcus and Caleb, and more generally important aspects of all good Dom/sub and Master/slave relationships. "Because despite everything, despite the pain, the frustration, the cage, he’d never felt more alive. More used. More owned. More loved." One line though i adamantly refute is this one: “Service isn’t about your pleasure, faggot, it’s about Mine.” Personally this one line would ruin a D/s connection for me because it demonstrates that in spite of everything, Marcus is almost exclusively interested in his own pleasure. He seems to lack an understanding that submission, obedience, and especially service are all great sources of pleasure for any true submissive. To me it seems Marcus is training his slave to be empty, blank, emotionless, and unhesitatingly responsive. i think in this modern context both Dom and sub, Master and slave, need positive constructive experiences and outcomes from their relationship. They each complete the other. To be fair to the author getting to know someone deeply takes a lot of time and attention. There is also a lot in the story to indicate that love is a strong component of their connection. i like to believe that Marcus words often don't reflect his real and ultimate intent or feelings, that he does love and cherish his slave. Downplaying this concern is easy when so much of the story reflects the kind of D/s or M/s relationship i fantasize about. For that once again i thank the author for sharing his imagination and smooth writing skills which vividly describes these characters and their relationship. This story is definitely one of my favorites!

Exceptional story -- and I loved the images.

Super fun and hot story! Thanks and Happy Holidays!❤️👍😛😛😛🎄🎄

absolutely brilliant. if the hypno eyes had caused one of the brothers to baby babble or call the Daddy of Crime 'da da' there would have definitely been an unintended accident for this humble reader. :wink:

Great work. Are we missing a bit? Seems like there was a sauna blow job we didn’t get to read?