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12/4/25, 10:42 PM
I really loved most the ghost fucking that Hunter got pretty early on in this story; it reminded me of one of bluesuedewho's stories a couple years back, one that actually torpedoed a story I'd written because it was so much better than what I'd been doing, so please see that as the compliment it is :-)

12/5/25, 12:49 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I’m so glad! There’s gonna be a lot of ghostfucking and just general phantom erotic weirdness during this series, I’m excited to share it and I think it’ll all be very fun for readers.
12/4/25, 11:11 PM
Glad to see more of this!!
12/4/25, 10:40 PM
I've been really enjoying this story! Thank you!
12/4/25, 1:07 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying this series. Very inventive. My only concern is that the over-powering nature of 'The Fire' might detract from the story as a whole. As an aside, I have only very recently dipped my toe in the 'AI Pond'. Until I read Corin's comment, I had no idea AI was involved. So what supposedly indicates 'AI Prose'? And what is 'Contains AI patterns' and how does it different from 'AI Assisted'? Also, are you using ChatGPT, your own GPT, or is there another one out there that is more suited to erotica? Thanks. Oh, and keep up the good work!

12/4/25, 11:34 AM
@[Aaelefein](/user/show/914471) Thank you for your kind words. It's very inspiring and motivating! In my understanding, "AI prose" means repeating plot points with different words, overexaggerating words that are out of context, inconsistent details, and anything that interferes with normal storytelling. The version of AI that I used in this story heavily used em dashes. There are hundreds of em dashes in the original output. If you read more closely, you may find unnatural colons, overly long insertion sentences, and piled-up adjectives. I edited most em dashes out and split sentences, but it seems that wasn't enough. So I am re-editing the remaining two chapters, making them more natural to read. The main frame of this story was inspired by a chat I had with ChatGPT. We discussed the overall lore and main plot, like what this _fire_ can or can't do and the personal traits of each character. Then I wrote a more detailed plot as a prompt and fed it into Grok. Grok is very open to erotic themes, as long as all participants are voluntary and no minors are included. After getting those raw outputs, I edited out the unnatural parts - tons of em dashes, for example - to make it more like erotica rather than dream talk. (The original outputs more like the last sentence.)

12/4/25, 10:32 PM
@[DestinSalvatore](/user/show/1962140) Good, good - Thanks! Haven't come across the problem of to many em-dashes, but then I use them and ellipsis quite often even before I came across GPT. Don't plan on letting GPT write my stories though - I'll write a chapter first, then let it do clean up, check for inconsistencies and contradictions, and suggest content that I wouldn't come up with on my own... I'm very poor with emotional and humor stuff. Great with the technical/scientific stuff though. Grok seems to have the same limitations as ChatGPT - no biggie there. Thanks much.
12/4/25, 2:52 PM
not only 3 chapters right? Awessome describe about the feel in body suits

12/4/25, 9:49 PM
@[bootswolf](/user/show/10054844) Yeah, it was getting too lenghty. I'll overlap on a 4rth instead
12/4/25, 9:30 PM
I really like the aspect where everybody acts as if everything is normal, and forgets the weirdness. I'm very curious if you'll make a part 2.
12/4/25, 2:50 PM
Goddamn that was hot 🥵🥵🥵

12/4/25, 9:02 PM
@[JimsJorts](/user/show/10008527) Thanks for the compliment. There is more to come.
12/4/25, 6:56 PM
Ok, this is amazing. I love the way you’re incorporating gay sex with cooking. It’s so imaginative and sexy at the same time.
12/4/25, 1:14 PM
I agree... Edlam's writing is ... well ... its just in another category of great storytelling. The darkness that he takes you into is so alluring, compelling, and erotic. I love how I am so able to visually watch the story while reading it... He incorporates the smells, sights, tastes. This story is just FANTASTIC. I am so horny for Brad. I hope hope hope I get a chance to read the follow-up of this exciting adventure for the twins.

12/4/25, 6:50 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) 🥰🥰🥰
12/4/25, 7:19 AM
I'm honestly irriatated and downright frustrated with Edlam right now. I know that this will be on Ko-fi only and I don't want to be blue balls again with unfinished stories that he managed to come up non-stop while waiting for the Re-Educator to continue, which is not even on Ko-Fi. -_- I'm both horny and conflicted and god dammit.

12/4/25, 6:49 PM
@[TcomJ](/user/show/921298) Sorry 🫣 I’m juggling a lot of balls but I will say, before my Ko-fi, I was releasing maybe a story a year…if that. Since I started it, I’ve released 14 new stories including Fetishized, which I did release here. I’ve also done the first two re-released chapters of I Love Him, But… and Re-Educator, and a couple new chapters of Beta Psi Phi, which I’m working on now. So I put a lotta more work into my writing than ever before. That said…I do need to finish these long awaited stories. That note I agree with completely. Hopefully I earn your trust again 🥰