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8/27/25, 5:01 AM
Malcolm makes sense. Clearly Ryan is struggling with acceptance so a more mature adult opens the door more than his teammates would as his first encounter

8/27/25, 7:56 AM
@[Viper-1](/user/show/10021969) you get it :-D

8/27/25, 5:27 PM
@[Viper-1](/user/show/10021969) @[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) In that case it would also explain why it cannot be the coach. The coach pushes him more "softly", manipulating and preventing him from fighting back. If Ryan knew that the coach thinks of him the same thing, then he wouldn't trust him to be "objective" or believe that his instructions are completely professional and nothing more
8/26/25, 3:24 PM
If you've got it in you to do another chapter, the "Jake taking a couple of pairs home to his brother and father" is a seriously hot thread you've left dangling.

8/27/25, 2:40 AM
@[TheMirrorCrack'd](/user/show/10021451) Shhhh...you'll spoil the third chapter that I'm currently working on. Hope to have it finished and posted by tomorrow and then any future installments (if any) will wait until after the U.S. Labor Day holiday. My boyfriend will kill me if I spend all weekend writing (though he is one of my biggest fans).

TheMirrorCrack'd
8/27/25, 3:58 PM
@[chiboxerboi](/user/show/909346) Looking forward to it. Love a well written story like this
8/27/25, 1:43 PM
thank you Jack! this is one of the best stories I've read and I've been a fan of your series for a while. I didn't quite imagine I would fall for Pete as a character more than Sammy, the character development was insane. where do I find more of them?
Tim
8/27/25, 1:12 PM
tasty and hot! love the description of the effect of the briefs as they slowly take over the Dean and the insight into the thought process of Cade.
8/27/25, 1:10 PM
That may be the hottest thing I've read on this site 🥵🔥
8/27/25, 12:02 PM
Another worthy chapter in the sage
Peanut
8/27/25, 11:50 AM
Can I get that job? XD
Anonymous
8/27/25, 10:41 AM
I’m loving this story, it’s developing so well and I can’t wait to see what happens next. The piss was a fun addition. I’m sure there’s plenty more ways this can develop, and plenty more things you’ve already teased at.
8/27/25, 9:31 AM
This chapter is the golden standard of erotic writing!!! Such a great chapter!
8/27/25, 8:25 AM
I really love this story so far! You've created some great characters and a really fun problem to overcome.