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7/11/25, 5:01 PM
Looking forward to a continuation!
7/11/25, 4:04 PM
Love to see where this is headed.
7/11/25, 3:29 PM
Love your superhero stories section. My favorite one is “Super Dude Gets Done.”
7/11/25, 12:27 PM
You outdo yourself, Jack! I read and reread your works of art.
Jul 8, 2025
DepressedRandomPerson
7/11/25, 12:05 PM
Guess the curse affected the men in the family as well.:rofl: Don't really like the racist elements , but even the story itself calls itself out on that and it affects both parties.
6/27/24, 2:37 PM
This is great. Such a good mix of horny and story. Cant wait for more!

6/30/24, 11:38 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) Hey Kyle, thanks for your comment! I appreciate it. Thanks for reading!

Anonymous
7/1/24, 12:04 PM
@[monarch_mvl118](/user/show/28683) Hey. Where is the third part /:-)

7/11/25, 5:32 AM
@Anonymous Still brainstorming for it. Hoping to start writing it soon.
6/25/25, 6:15 AM
This is a great work, i will wait to see more of you

7/11/25, 5:31 AM
@[Pan2109](/user/show/10008961) Thank you! I'm still brainstorming part 3. I'm hoping to start writing it soon.
7/11/25, 4:34 AM
Thanks so much guys! I've edited it to fix the formatting so hopefully it will be more readable. Just finished chapter 2 waiting for approval.
7/10/25, 10:50 PM
Excellently written and white-hot. Loved the competing narratives.

7/11/25, 3:54 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I'm planning to use Ollie and Ed as a framing narrative, so they'll be back but not right away! Hope that there's some more characters and hot action that grabs you though. Part 2 has some set up/exposition for Ed as a younger man and the situation he finds himself then Part 3 is...pretty hot, I think.. White-hot? I really value that compliment. Thank you for the comment.