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4/9/24, 5:06 PM
Woohoo! What an exciting conclusion! Can't wait to see what a bunch of gay musclefreak giants get up to on their own private tropical island!

4/9/24, 9:45 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) I'm sure they'll be fine until the computer system that cannot fail does, the security system goes offline, and the exhibits start attacking the guests...

4/10/24, 1:18 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) The *real* question is, will the security system fail because a disgruntled employee will disable it in an attempt to steal some of the hyper cum to sell to a shady businessman (and get transformed himself in the process)?
4/9/24, 8:09 PM
Thanks for all the awesome parts until here! Is there any chance of you continuing the story one day? :)

4/9/24, 11:34 PM
@[Myungen](/user/show/1449938) I may finish it someday. Part of the next chapter is already written. Just need to have more time to work on it.

4/10/24, 1:03 AM
@[RubberRoswell](/user/show/908893) Wow, that’s really delightful news! Looking forward to it. Take care and happy writing times!
4/9/24, 12:55 PM
Really like this and I assume there are more stories behind it. Like who created the computer, who was the Drone 1, where were the other drones, were they all real soldiers or also victims with different backgrounds. All are mysterious and developmental. Wish the story could be continued :)

4/10/24, 12:29 AM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) There is a lot more background that answers some of the questions you have but not all of them and at some point I might write more but we'll have to see, until then, let your mind wonder.
Hurricane
4/9/24, 11:09 PM
Love this story so much, it tickles so many of my fanatsies. I've been waiting for this chapter and I'm so happy because it was even better than I was expecting

4/10/24, 12:26 AM
@[Hurricane](/user/show/1255929) Very cool, I'm glad to tickle your fantasies and better, can I ask which part? Maybe I'll try and hit them again...
4/10/24, 12:19 AM
Oh man I've been reading you for years. I've been having a dry spell (lol) of ideas and stories, but your story made me laugh in the middle of SF and then hot. Double whammy!
4/9/24, 11:45 PM
Such a sexy chapter to reread! Love the way he makes them his.
Anonymous
4/9/24, 9:37 PM
Onyx embezzled from the League? I think that raises questions on what Onyx's original power was. . . I think of it as interesting
4/9/24, 8:49 PM
Great beginning! Please continue if you ever have the time for it! :)
4/9/24, 8:07 PM
So fucking hot, this entire series. I imagine myself as Kevin, as Sirs faggot slut. Being trained and dominated. Amazing! Love it
4/9/24, 6:47 PM
Been looking forward to this update and it’s definitely worth the wait! Really, REALLY love the continuation of Dunc’s cum-lock and the effects it has on his psyche and overall obedience. I just love athletic jocks being teased and edged like this. Young jocks are usually virile and sexually active, and so for someone like Dunc to be depraved and totally controlled in such a way is just completely titillating to me. And you do such a great job in capturing Dunc’s frustrated thoughts and feelings during his cum-lock ordeal. Personally, I wouldn’t mind if Dunc stays like this, he can be a lax-bro fuck toy, a living dildo who doesn’t ejaculate haha. At the very least, I hope Mr. Mandrake keeps his ejaculations at a very bare minimum and it kinda make sense narratively too, since lax-bros are probably more obedient the more horny and frustrated they are! The stuff with the wrestlers are also quite interesting too, btw, but Dunc’s cum-lock journey is definitely the star of the show for me. Anyway, really awesome chapter once again and thank you for posting for us. It’s been such a TREAT!