Recent Comments

3/6/24, 2:29 AM
I really liked this. It carried a very personable, informal style that suited the purpose of the story well, and the himbo/jockificaiton of James was done well. I especially liked the idea that you tread the line between magic and reality, kind of keeping it up to the reader of whether or not there was something supernatural going on or it was simply James blending and fitting into his environment. Very well done!
3/6/24, 2:26 AM
Humm 🤤❤️
blankbot
3/6/24, 1:57 AM
Great writing.
K
3/6/24, 12:48 AM
Great!
offeringservice26
3/5/24, 11:28 PM
It took me like a week to get through this because I kept cumming every few pages lol thanks for another awesome story!!
3/5/24, 3:44 AM
nice start. looking forward to more toys getting created

Willie Cici
3/5/24, 2:05 PM
@[mutak](/user/show/952269) That's why I love reader's comments. I never thought of this story as more than a "one chapter". Your comment made me think about possible extra chapters. Thanks.

3/5/24, 10:46 PM
@Willie Cici Maybe a GI Joe Toy next or He-Man? ;)
3/5/24, 8:09 PM
Good interesting start! Looking forward to more of it.
3/5/24, 7:54 PM
Interesting concept. It'd be interesting to know how the Kens (like Greg) were sourced, how they came about to become Kens waiting to be bought.
3/5/24, 5:52 PM
Love it. Would love to read it from the perspective of someone who doesn’t quite understand what’s happening to them. Like a frat house party even.
2/20/24, 5:49 PM
Very hot and it's super-well written!!!😍

2/20/24, 6:41 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Wow... thank you. anything in particular you liked in it?

3/5/24, 4:44 PM
@[midwest_hypnosis](/user/show/925698) Sorry, I had missed the mail that told me you answered. :sweat_smile: I really liked the "accident" part. But overall, I just though you have a very nice writing style, it's descriptive but very pleasant to read. good build-up for the mental influence and how the character's feel their opinion changes.