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8/28/25, 8:42 AM
Honestly an amazing story, i wonder what the entity is about
8/27/25, 7:54 PM
So I have to admit this Travis feels different then how he first appeared and I honestly can't say I'm that big of a fan of him gaining dominance. And honestly things feel as if they are going in a direction that feels different than what it looked like it was going to go which makes me more worried. The premise and the start was fun. The sleep study and subliminal hypno were great but yeah.

Anonymous
8/28/25, 7:46 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I think you have a specific set of expectations for a direction the story was never gonna go in. This is perfectly in line with what I was hoping for, it’s hot as fuck. It’s also in line with this author’s usual (sexy as hell) style of writing and story plots
Ben
8/28/25, 7:30 AM
Wow this was hot!!!
Mar 16, 2009
8/28/25, 6:09 AM
sadly there never was a continuation :-(
8/28/25, 5:39 AM
Fuck…think i have the mantra running in my head as much as it runs in Mike’s! It might be interesting to explore locking him up…but with such control…he is basically already locked…and isn’t the mental control so much hotter than physical devices?
8/28/25, 4:54 AM
I am loving this too. I also want to see a bath house orgy with fisting and piss play or maybe in a adult store or club. Either way I hope Josh does not get to big a conscience and try to Factor on the good work that's on into Mike already.
8/27/25, 2:00 AM
Nice start; I'm looking forward to seeing what happens. I have the feeling I should have started with your other stories first, so I'll go start on them now. Barbershop hypno with a military overlay is a favorite (and yes I've read the Bulldawg stories make times 😈).

8/28/25, 4:45 AM
@[meatheadosis](/user/show/9860) Thanks for the comment. Glad these stories hit that spot for you. This one is still a work in progress, meaning I don't know where I'm going to take it. I'm open to suggestions.
8/28/25, 4:10 AM
You are a very fine author. Thank you for this story.
8/27/25, 11:33 PM
That was INCREDIBLY hot. 🔥🔥🔥
8/27/25, 9:39 AM
Will you continue this at some point, it was one of my favorites.

8/27/25, 10:43 PM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) Thanks for checking in. I have to admit that my motivation to write has unfortunately been pretty low for some time due to work stress and other matters. I did started up on writing the next chapter for a bit, but the inspiration just hasn't been strong enough to chug out the words as I would have liked to. I do have every intention to continue and finish this series...and I know it's probably my most popular piece on here...but I just can't make any promises on when I could get that through. Sorry to keep you waiting, but I hope to be able to continue this some time soon enough.