Recent Comments

2/25/24, 4:41 PM
such a great installment. Sounds like Smokey could use a smoke after all that growing!

2/25/24, 8:23 PM
@[cigar_muscle](/user/show/17400) You're right! Smokey himself has said how he got his nickname because of his stogies, yet we haven't seen him smoke once, yet! I will fix that very soon.

2/26/24, 2:03 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) oh hell yea!!
Anonymous
2/15/24, 8:05 PM
Removed my name just to be extra sure I’m not unintentionally revealing myself too early. Thanks for the amazing response! The next chapter has been broken down plot-wise and writing begins this evening! Hopefully a chapter 2 to come next week. I’d like to try to get at least 3-4 chapters out by the end of the contest with 5 chapters total and a small epilogue.

Anonymous
2/15/24, 8:39 PM
@The Story's Author (hidden) I think I already know who you are; as I'm familiar with your style and prose, but I do hope you don't leave us hanging!

Anonymous
2/17/24, 12:05 AM
@The Story's Author (hidden) Best news yet

Anonymous
2/20/24, 1:56 AM
@The Story's Author (hidden) More soon?

2/25/24, 11:58 PM
@The Story's Author (hidden) Are you close on a second chapter? Need some twincest

2/26/24, 1:31 AM
@AnonDog Just posted chapter two! Will just need to wait for approval <3
Sam
2/26/24, 1:13 AM
I’m loving this slow burn!!
will we get part 2?
2/25/24, 11:36 PM
2???
2/25/24, 10:52 PM
I love this series. The vignettes you tell as the fog drifts across the town are all so exciting and different. I can't wait until the next instalment
2/25/24, 8:14 PM
Amen Currious! He’s turned us into total sluts for the next chapter. My name is John Roger’s and I’m a slut for Jack Parker’s stories.
2/25/24, 8:03 PM
As someone who deeply enjoys demon transformations and rarely gets to read it… thank you 😈
2/25/24, 7:14 PM
Oh, this is _really_ fun. And it does a fantastic job with playing on the ideas of the previous chapters and taking them to a new level—very nice! The characterization of the salesmen is also a great touch, and the ending sequence with the technician was inspired. I'm a fan!

2/25/24, 7:31 PM
@[Nu and the Nus](/user/show/25270) Thank you! That’s really appreciated coming from you (as I immensely enjoy your stories 😁)!
2/25/24, 4:20 PM
Great start to this story. Can't wait to see the father fall and get turned into a puppet.