Recent Comments

cuirmoss
1/25/24, 8:36 AM
I was really missing this series! Thank you for bringing it back
1/25/24, 7:16 AM
Continuity error. Now fixed. Thanks, F1.
1/25/24, 4:27 AM
Really impressive! Great writing! Great imagery, build up, and awesome tension and manipulation of the situation… and I even felt it myself… you worked your magic on me as much as on the coach! Thank you!

1/25/24, 7:08 AM
@[Frank1](/user/show/10000899) Glad you enjoyed it, Frank. More to come. -JT.
Cracker
11/18/21, 8:55 PM
Fk great. This is really hot.

Jock Topper
11/18/21, 9:14 PM
****Thanks @Cracker. I take that as a huge compliment coming from someone with your talent.

1/25/24, 4:20 AM
@Jock Topper hey JT, your note to cracker implies that he might be a writer too, that impresses you! Is that true? Would you share how to access his work??? Or is that not cool to ask?

1/25/24, 7:05 AM
@[Frank1](/user/show/10000899) He's on this site. Check out: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10023984
Anonymous
1/25/24, 5:01 AM
Can’t wait to see how the whole series will end up!
Anonymous
1/25/24, 4:57 AM
I have been looking for your stories for so longggg so glad to see you’re back
1/25/24, 3:54 AM
My checking back finally paid off! Loved this chapter, of course. It took a few satisfying sessions to complete it. Life happens and breaks are understood, but I hope you keep writing (preferably before 3 more years). Love that this father and son were put through this, know what's happening, but can't do anything about it! Great work.

1/25/24, 4:52 AM
@[HusbandFirst](/user/show/2436468) Thanks so much for your continued support! Glad to know that I managed to interrupt your reading...:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: I do still have some other ideas in mind for other stories, but creative writing is a time and brain power consuming effort. I'll definitely try my best to keep it going, we'll see how it goes. Thanks.
1/25/24, 12:10 AM
It wonderful and great things to see you add another chapter. I like the part how they punishment them. And just control their body and crave but still remain their personal. It little bit sad the story is end. I thought their would be a part like make them list some man or boy to force them join club than the end. Anyway it good to see you write more! Very thankful.

1/25/24, 4:43 AM
@[easterblue229](/user/show/920853) Thanks! Unfortunately I don't feel like I have any more interesting new inspirations to bring to this series at this point. I have covered the operations of the Club and how the servants got enslaved into working for the Club. I guess I could go on some more about the Club's activities or how Ron or Chris might be made to go about recruiting more innocent men. But I feel like I don't have any new ideas to present these in a different and interesting way, so I'd end up just repeating the similar plots that I've already written about. So I think it might be best to just wrap it up nicely. But thanks for your support and comment anyway!
1/25/24, 4:36 AM
Wow, the way you describe things is amazing, the phrases you use and the obvious experience behind your storytelling is clear! I feel like you take me on a journey and you plan how I’ll end up… just like the top in the story leads his new devotee where he wants him to end up, and what he experiences along the way! Damn! One question that confused me, is this part two of JT seducing Coach Murphy, or JT seducing a new Coach (Johnson)? Thank you for writing and taking me on an exciting journey! Damn I want to meet you and see who you are in person! Wow
1/25/24, 3:26 AM
Good story, well written and enjoyable like all of your stuff that I've read. I did find it interesting you chose to use Welsh as the alien language.