Recent Comments

1/11/24, 12:21 AM
As always Soren, another great story that breaths life and character into your world that you have beautifully crafted! How you wrote such a fun and lighthearted, yet incredibly precise and sexy, story based off a single gif is beyond me, I continue to be envious of your writing abilities! Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what else you have planned!

1/22/24, 6:18 AM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) I’m still shocked that I was able to get all this out of one GIF at all. I knew I had to write _something_, or else I’d die, but what? Took a lot of brainstorming to get to this point. But as long as I captured the essential hotness and vibe of the source material, I’m happy. Thanks for reading!!
kuro
1/10/24, 11:32 PM
I think that that was one of my favourite skullfucking scenes put to digital paper - well done! And righteous spreading of gayness via reality change is always gonna be my cup of tea, so good work all round!

1/22/24, 6:17 AM
@[kuro](/user/show/10001473) I just love me a skullfucking. I’m glad I pulled it off for you! I love when a bottom is enthusiastic about getting his face wrecked, and I had extra fun with the mid-game consent check before things got even harder.
1/10/24, 8:00 PM
Hot! Fascinating reality change. Sexy times here.

1/22/24, 6:09 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I’m glad you enjoyed it! I was really digging the idea of someone who undergoes a reality change and yet ends up a dom top on the other side, and I’m glad the change didn’t affect your enjoyment of Evan’s POV. That, and the fact that the reality change isn’t even what made Evan gay, explicitly, just that the openness it induced made him totally down to explore his gay side. It’s honestly a damn indirect way to make someone gay… but the Priapist managed a lot with a little by bringing the whole frat along with Evan.
1/10/24, 7:31 PM
Enjoyed the reality shifting aspects. The characters have just enough a feeling of wrongness to add a frisson of uncertainty before they get onboard with the new world. The descriptions were also great. Enough details about appearances, sensations, and emotions without getting too purple prose. Looks like the frat is going to save money by skipping protein shakes with Evan around, though they might be forced into a bulking phase if Braden's distended abs are evidence of Evan's new normal output. :laughing:

1/22/24, 6:06 AM
@[johnclark](/user/show/1014143) I’m a big fan of the ‘gradual adjustment to a new reality’ kind of vibe—I feel that drawing it out and giving the characters multiple chances to reflect consciously or subconsciously about the change in their world makes it feel more realistic, if “realistic” is really a word that I can use for this kind of thing. And I wouldn’t be surprised if you were right about the bulking phase—after everyone gets a taste of Evan’s loads, they might all start getting that rugby body Evan craves so much… thanks for reading and commenting! I‘m glad you saw what I was going for.
1/22/24, 5:51 AM
This is such a clever way to do a transformation story! Funny AND hot!
1/22/24, 3:42 AM
The ending definitely kept me wanting more. Nice story man
HypnoMutt
1/22/24, 3:32 AM
Stunning and exciting. Instant classic.
1/22/24, 3:32 AM
I really enjoyed the story. It was really hot. Now that it's been a few years, I'd love to read a sequel to it. Maybe Jake becomes shorter and fatter once he's in college after Adam gains some of the weight back. Every time he reaches out to Jake he ruins him more.
Jan 20, 2024
1/22/24, 3:08 AM
I'd love to see where this goes
mikegay4u
1/22/24, 2:01 AM
Can't get enough. I need more. So sexy.