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8/27/25, 1:10 PM
That may be the hottest thing I've read on this site 🥵🔥
8/27/25, 12:02 PM
Another worthy chapter in the sage
Peanut
8/27/25, 11:50 AM
Can I get that job? XD
Anonymous
8/27/25, 10:41 AM
I’m loving this story, it’s developing so well and I can’t wait to see what happens next. The piss was a fun addition. I’m sure there’s plenty more ways this can develop, and plenty more things you’ve already teased at.
8/27/25, 9:31 AM
This chapter is the golden standard of erotic writing!!! Such a great chapter!
8/27/25, 8:25 AM
I really love this story so far! You've created some great characters and a really fun problem to overcome.
8/27/25, 8:10 AM
Nice ending. Definitely worth the wait.
8/27/25, 8:14 AM
I would love this to actually happen ♥
Bottom Jock
8/27/25, 12:24 AM
Malcom was an interesting addition. I was feeling the dynamic that had been established with Ryan being the team's bitch. Couldn't Malcom have been any character from the team? Also, I'm still holding out hope for some descriptions of Ryan's big ass and how it has grown to accommodate his new position on the team. Still a hot story tho.

8/27/25, 7:56 AM
@Bottom Jock the only character Malcolm could have been on the team is Coach, but future chapters will establish why it was Malcolm.
Anonymous
8/26/25, 11:10 PM
i would habe loved for him te be made the teams bitchboy. Malcom as a new charakter feels too hasty written and diesnt really fit for me

8/27/25, 7:55 AM
@Anonymous Malcolm will make more sense with the next chapter (just don't expect that soon).