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1/5/24, 2:17 PM
Fun and fast-paced little story, but I wonder if the change is a little too instantaneous. You could get a lot more dramatic tension if the subject was able to put up some temporary resistance as he gradually transformed into an orc.
10/4/23, 7:14 PM
I remember the original story fondly, so I was prepared for the mechanics of the story but the twist and turns still surprised me. A really clever way to write reality altering. I could easily see it continued with other settings. A freshman at college getting better and better acquainted with his roommate, classmates and professors. Or an Office setting with a boss wanting to highten moral more and more.

10/6/23, 2:46 AM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) Thank you! And I'm glad some of the reruns of the day were able to surprise you, was a little concerned with the length that it would get repetitive. And thanks for the suggestions! As a mechanic I think it works better when there's a lot of background details to tweak throughout, so both of those settings could be good.

1/5/24, 2:07 PM
@[TickledPink](/user/show/151577) I like those ideas too, they could be good part 3 and 4
Geo
1/5/24, 1:50 PM
This series is getting better by the chapter! Maybe some cigars get in play at some point... 😏
Rubberspiraldronthiago
1/5/24, 11:03 AM
Yes!! I love this
1/5/24, 10:55 AM
Great story, I love reading a lot of your stories 10/10
Anonymous
1/5/24, 8:30 AM
I'm so hard
1/5/24, 6:22 AM
Hypnothrill! My heart (and other parts) skip a beat when I see your name appear! Loved it and I enjoyed the visual stimulus! A nice easy and quick read that still packed your erotic punch! Would love to see the other pics in the forum ;) Can't wait for what 2024 has in store for you!
1/5/24, 5:21 AM
When this going to happen in real life too? 🥵
1/5/24, 3:47 AM
Hypnothrill has returned! :D Always good to see you writing again. As others have said, I'm not crazy about the use of AI imagery (although I'm guilty of going to Tumblr accounts that use it...glass houses and such). This wasn't my favorite of yours (largely because I've never really gotten into the incest thing), although certain portions--especially the scene where we see Seth slowly giving in only to snap back--were amazing, and it's awesome to see so many people loving the story and cheering for you to be back! :D Hooray for Hypnothrill!
Dec 21, 2023
1/4/24, 3:36 AM
The tittle caught my attention then decided to read this preview and I found the premise so interesting. Decided to download the book and I love it, great story. Love this concept and I got me wanted more definitely

1/4/24, 12:32 PM
@[ArieZ](/user/show/10040349) Thank you so much -- I'm really glad you liked it! I was able to sneak this book in as an LGBTQ "Thriller" rather than "Erotica" -- even though it contains some very hot sexual moments, it's about the story -- which gives me a broader opportunity to market it online. (Amazon puts limits on promoting erotica.) It's been slowly gaining attention from more than my fan-base -- fingers crossed that continues. But I really do think rich old gay men will do anything to remain young.

1/5/24, 3:25 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Love that it’s gaining some attention definitely deserved. The thriller aspect make the story more appealing to me. Hopefully you can continue making more novels like these one