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1/2/24, 4:13 PM
Oh my god you have everything I could possibly want in a story here. Please keep going!

1/2/24, 5:59 PM
@[TheWalkingAlive](/user/show/925088) I fully intend on it! Might be a while, I want to do this for fun/a break from my other writing duties, but I know exactly what I intend on doing to Robert and Nathan, and if people want me to keep going from there, I've got ideas of how to keep going. If there's anything you'd like to see gone further into, let me know! Trying to use this as a chance to improve my show/don't tell chops, especially because I feel that's hard to do when it comes to some of what I'm into.

1/4/24, 3:43 PM
@[Massaurin](/user/show/10005276) I’m glad to hear there will be more one day. The only thing I would add is some intox stuff. Slobs love getting high and/or drunk as they indulge!
1/4/24, 2:45 PM
Just like Max said, its interesting to see that they are already a couple and Hypno is just now getting introduce. And im such a sucker for 2 in 1 stories, tender and romantic stories, and hot and spicy. Cant wait to see where this would go.
1/4/24, 2:19 PM
OMG! When you publish a story, you hit "all the right notes". Great writing, great plot, and a perfect conclusion. It was nice to know what had happened to the women for once.
Anonymous
1/4/24, 1:54 PM
This is so hot!! Really love the idea that each of them in the Circuit becoming perfect the more minds are linked into it! Bodies growing as information on how to optimally make their bodies grow with more muscle and get healthier~ I wonder if they'll end up looking almost like carbon copies of each other~ Can't wait for more!
1/4/24, 11:19 AM
Definitely has room for a part 2, possibly adding Kevin's dad to the Circuit.
Anonymous
1/4/24, 11:13 AM
hot story as always and made even hotter with the images…
1/4/24, 10:56 AM
Hot!n please write more tickle stories like this! XD
1/4/24, 8:23 AM
Very sexy. Love when guys slowly get turned into a gay hunk.
1/4/24, 7:55 AM
Saving this… can already tell this’ll be a fav
Anonymous
1/4/24, 7:52 AM
My GOODNESS! Your mastery of the themes central to this site never fails to elevate the genre as a whole. Thank you!