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12/23/23, 2:54 PM
So another great chapter as always but I wanted to check a potential consistency issue. Didnt Sarah say that Nick could not be the Pilot as Tri Hard could imitate Nick and get in through the back door? Im probably missing something I just remember that being why Henry agreed to Rodriguez as the pilot.

Anonymous
12/23/23, 5:15 PM
@[Buck Whitman](/user/show/10001298) I'm glad you mentioned this; there are reasons! Sarah had originally planned to make Nick into Henry's pilot without giving him the same powers. She thought it would be safer and easier that way. But, after Charles makes her reconsider the risks, she concludes that she'd only be making Nick more of a target. _That_ is her real motivation in pushing the boys into this. By being together, the pair should be able to protect themselves and eachother from the villain's manipulations. Despite the compulsions being stronger post-treatment, Nick already shows us how he can subvert them by disregarding **Super Bitch's** words! The same can be done to ignore **Tri-Hard's** mimicry.

12/24/23, 12:04 AM
@Anonymous Ahh,... ^ this is me :3 Now I remember why I don't post from my phone,...
12/23/23, 11:06 PM
Welp there it is. It is inevitable that Matt and Daniel will find each other and Daniel being claimed. Now that they are together, balls are rolling. Josh is hunting them. Damn Daniel, why'd you not remove your watch. Now you put target on your new found family. Im wondering why is this two have very strong effect on each other. Is Daniel like his Soulmate? I thought its Jared? Or maybe he is just special because he is the first one? Cant wait for the next update.
12/23/23, 10:51 PM
loved this chapter great job, wouldn't mind reading some more chapters about these 2 in the future
EJG
12/23/23, 9:56 PM
Never did get that extra bike ride
12/20/23, 1:10 PM
Re-read the entirz thing before this chapter (I had completely forgot about Hans!) And man, you really are one of the best authors on the site!

12/23/23, 9:29 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) I’m glad you liked it and thank you for your kind comments. It’s great to know that what you have written is appreciated..
Lavender Lad
12/23/23, 9:07 PM
You can't even imagine how long I have been waiting for you to post something new here, you're one of my favorite writers on this site. Going to throughly enjoy this!
A very pleased reader
12/23/23, 7:40 PM
Honestly? Great finale for a great story 👏 can’t wait for your next one man, honestly the whole concept of the story and the trigger play really made it for me, awesome!
Dec 21, 2023
12/23/23, 5:58 PM
The paperback version is finally available on Amazon. https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CQVT6S43
6/4/22, 11:11 PM
Sorry working a tonne will be released possibly Monday more likely next Saturday. It’s half finished.

Zander
12/23/23, 5:39 PM
@[Anyonka](/user/show/195201) I hope there will be a continuation)
Zander
12/23/23, 5:22 PM
I wish the chapters were longer and there were more sex scenes.