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12/14/23, 12:52 AM
This is a highly erotic story of racial conquest. The narrative arc moves the central character from conqueror to slave-warrior through anal insemination. It is an arousing account of transformation through sexual domination.
Arpágonu
12/13/23, 10:07 PM
That fall to the dark and wild side is super sexy. You have left me wanting to see what he does with the car. He certainly seems like a bad boy now. I imagine a camaro style car would suit him, maybe a motorcycle too. I love your way of writing and that you continue to do it consistently. I can't wait for the next part
12/13/23, 9:21 PM
I've gotta xay, this is a really well written story!
12/13/23, 12:54 PM
This story doesn't seem to be going anywhere. what was J's issue with D? why didn't the store owner ask them why they were fighting? kind of a strange thing to gloss over.

12/13/23, 8:01 PM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) Hi musclejunky, thanks for the feedback. I know I have to adjust my shot. I was already thinking of explaining some things in chapter 4. I tried to write to you privately to ask for advice, but I can't find you on the forum.
12/13/23, 7:21 PM
Great story! Hope you continue with it. It has a lot of promise
12/13/23, 6:31 PM
Loving the humiliation. Very hot story!
12/13/23, 3:57 PM
Woooooow my ñame is Alejandro, and I’d really enjoy to have the same fate as him… hottest story ever!
12/1/23, 11:26 PM
Love this. Will there be a part 2?

12/2/23, 3:10 AM
@[gotacoolname](/user/show/234002) Debating it.

12/13/23, 2:20 PM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Think it's worth a part 2. Much to be done with the dad - what if he finds out about his son? What then?
12/13/23, 6:50 AM
Now I soooo wished I had sensitive nipples!… Thanks for this story. So well written, and such a treat for a Talley fan like me! There’s sunshine and strength in that glorious summer of love. And that’s a brilliant streak of hope. Lots of pillowy hugs to you!

12/13/23, 2:01 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) You and me both! Nipples this sensitive are probably more of a fantasy than a reality, but it was still hot to write about how good they felt for Talley. It’s always great bringing Talley back into the picture. His saga is certainly the longest I’ve written so far, and he has a lot left to go through. I’m looking forward to writing more. Thanks for reading!