Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/10/25, 7:00 AM
I'm excited to see where you'll take this sequel; I really enjoyed the first story. If I may make a request, please describe the superhero costumes. I feel like that was missing in the first part, and it's something I always appreciate. I could never really picture The Scarlet Prodigy's costume other than that it was crimson and black. I really enjoyed your description of his costume in the last chapter as baby blue and pink because it was such a humiliating change for them. I hope you'll give us a description of The Scarlet Prodigy and Scarlet Sidekick's costumes, so it will be hotter to imagine if you decide to change them as the story goes on.

12/10/25, 7:04 AM
@Anonymous Thank you so much buddy , I will make sure I do that and of course this time round there will his side kicks costume too ☺️
12/10/25, 5:48 AM
Another great chapter, Soren! I know you've been working on this for a long time, so it's great to finally see all those ideas come to fruition and light! I'm really interested in Hunter's arc and seeing where his feelings take him in the story, especially with this Hunt that Hawk has been planning! Really great job balancing the numerous perspectives, as well as continuing to pepper in the worldbuilding without being too much! Good work, Soren! :smiley:
12/10/25, 5:30 AM
best story
12/10/25, 4:59 AM
Excellent stuff! I'll admit I always have a soft spot of characters like Aaron- somebody has to do all the (over)working and (over)thinking that keeps the world moving forward! Rooting for him to find a way to happiness without losing his mind. xx
12/10/25, 4:44 AM
This was a great story, and I deodnitely look forward to more chapter on this series. It was an interesting take to describe the mergee experience and part of the whole ride even as a fave on a muscle. This is definitely a new one that would be awesome to explore on future stories. That Hugh character was awesome, a mountain of muscle walking about with 10 merged guys in his body. It was especially funny to read how he doesn't like to ear alone, despite having at least 10 guys absorbed into his muscles. Though, now that I think about it, after giving so much detail about Hugh, I half expected to see more of his and his various absorbed guys as part of the main action. Lets say some scene showing Hugh merging 2 more guys into him, or lets say Brian as a face now on Noel's chest bonded more with one or two faces on Hugh's body. Either way, great story, fresh, looking forward to more, and so on.
12/10/25, 4:14 AM
Loved it
12/9/25, 2:57 PM
I thought the dragon would send the fallen hero back to maintaining a false peace by day and indulging in the game of desire by night, but things didn't turn out as I expected, haha.

12/10/25, 4:11 AM
@[Ozzy](/user/show/10048159) That would have been a fun idea, but I just can't see Mr. Dragon letting his pet off his leash for that long. Now, if the Light Dragon still decides to send another hapless hero after him,... well, maybe that's the sort of fate the two Dark Dragons might come up with to pass the time.
Anonymous
12/10/25, 4:10 AM
God I absolutely loved every part of this
Anonymous
12/10/25, 4:06 AM
This was such an amazing chapter and I loved reading it. You wove the main plots all happening at once together so well!
12/8/25, 7:49 PM
Another great chapter

12/10/25, 1:41 AM
@[JockPupTraxxx](/user/show/26244) Thanks!