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8/26/25, 3:40 PM
Excellent continuation, hot chapter. It will be interesting to see new chapters where Tom corrupts his friends' daddies) it would be interesting to read how Tom would wish for the daddies to know what is happening to them and how he controls reality by changing their bodies and leaving their minds unchanged, so that they voluntarily become his slaves when he breaks them)!
8/26/25, 2:59 PM
So like one of the commands was you are a slut for guys who want to fuck you, it was a trained command, so of course Mike was effected and seduced by Travis. That part had me scratching my head. If you want to make it so only Josh is able to trigger Mike, then you have to make it so "only when I say the words will you go under" would apply. I actually said this is a previous chapter but the fact that anyone can trigger Mike is dangerous. Its risky. And it could lead to a bad end if found out by someone not Josh. The rimming was hot, nice presentation there. Would love more of it. The loosing control due to the pleasure was great too. I definitely want Josh to reinforce that Mike is supposed to be himself when not triggered because having a normal life is fun, and then he gets triggered and is a good slutty boi.
8/26/25, 2:53 PM
Wow. I wonder if Josh will feel confident enough to continue the programming without putting Mike under? And this is just a thought, but what if Travis and Josh start having a tug of war over Mike? Travis has done across Mike's triggers. Thigh it doesn't seem he won't need them anymore. That being said, Mike has essentially confessed to Josh so it maybe moot. Actually, what if Josh and Taylor double teamed on Mike instead?
ControlMe
8/26/25, 2:42 PM
The set-up was excellent, but the exposition of the rape/slutting-out scene was far too rushed. What was going through Jack's head as he found himself obeying Matt's commands? What was Jack feeling as he was anally penetrated for the first time? There was so much to work with that was just glossed over.
8/26/25, 2:07 PM
The dad needs to try oby aswell.
Anonymous
8/26/25, 1:45 PM
This is one of my favorite series on here! Really hoping that we’ll get to read another chapter soon.
ohiobuck47
8/26/25, 12:44 PM
Enjoyed the story. Very good attempt for your first time.
Aug 18, 2025
8/26/25, 12:26 PM
look forward to the updates