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8/11/23, 5:20 AM
this is the 10,000,000th story!
8/11/23, 3:03 AM
I was gonna leave a comment on PLEASE write a part 2... And reading that there is one made me really happy.
ann
8/11/23, 1:05 AM
Love this! Please continue.
8/10/23, 10:04 AM
Superb! What a glorious chapter. The cunning ways of instilling envy in each of the two to-be-victims. Delicious. I loved the use of edging to 'torture' Blake into lust and wanting to get off, envious of gooner Gabe getting to shoot as much as he wanted. Jerking off in his own soul at his boyfriend's corruption is mightily hot too. I really enjoyed the way they were led to contribute to sullying themselves to be ready for the next demon. Gabe's already so far gone, it's only a matter of time. So excited for the next chapter!

8/10/23, 5:05 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks! I had a bit of writers block before the connection between envy and edging occurred to me. Glad it landed!

8/11/23, 12:38 AM
@[BateSeeker](/user/show/235651) Writers' block sucks but you nailed it with the solution. I never would have considered this and it is truly perfect. Both hot, because edging and that need growing really feeds into the corruption element. But tying in someone unrestricted able to enjoy orgasm after orgasm and cover themselves in jizz right in front of their tormented friend to elicit envy. Chef's kiss.
8/10/23, 8:55 PM
I wish Carolyn could have been a man that ends up serving master Milton in a sexual way too (maybe a threesome with the fiancé and dad?)
James
8/10/23, 7:24 PM
This was so hot!!!
Leo
8/10/23, 7:09 PM
Such a great start! You should make a chapter where we see the dad fall under his son’s control and the hot roleplay scene that happened in the bedroom! Also, please send the mom away. She’s not important. Have dad steal her ring and propose to his master, this will make their romantic relationship official.
8/10/23, 6:01 PM
This is great. Love a twink transformation. Would love to see a sequel where you transform other actors into young twinks
8/10/23, 5:59 PM
Hoping this is continued! Awesome premise and writing!
8/10/23, 5:37 PM
Really loved this story and the tie-ins to fairy tales, though hoo boy the racial slurs were hard to get through.