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Jeen
9/3/25, 1:39 AM
I get that you’re trying to go for a happy ending that’s more comforting and less intense or kinky/sexy but it basically fails at being either. It’s trying not to be dark and kinky by shoehorning in consent and romance making for a boring but comfortable ending, and yet it’s not comfortable and romantic either. It’s creepy because Mike is going about new his life with a boyfriend who secretly brainwashed him and hasn’t faced any consequences for it, while giving “consent” which isn’t actually consent because Mike isn’t fully informed about what Josh did to him and why his sexuality changed. As a result it’s simultaneously boring and unsettling. Very disappointed with this ending, and unfortunately it retroactively makes the rest of the story much less fun because you know that the hottest kinks are going to fizzle out in the end and be replaced by something neither interesting nor sexy but weird and awkward :/
9/3/25, 1:26 AM
I wish I had a therapist like this!
Jeen
9/3/25, 12:56 AM
Agreed that the ending is very random and tacked-on feeling for such a kinky and hot story. I guess a romantic ending is ok but you have to make it make sense as a resolution and this doesn’t. Not to mention that it throws everything kinky and hot in the bin, this is gay spiral stories not generic gay love stories

Jeen
9/3/25, 1:12 AM
@Jeen Also agreed that the romance thing feels very hollow when you realize that Josh is literally an unrepentant rapist who ends up with a lovey dovey ending as vanilla boyfriends with his unwitting victim that he hides the truth from. Not even that fictional/fantasy nonconsent isn’t ok, but that in-universe it’s treated like a bad thing when Josh tries to undo it and only kind of succeeds, but then it’s swept under the rug in the end anyways. Like why should we want them to have a happy ending together, how does Josh deserve that after what he’s done?
Aug 31, 2025
9/3/25, 1:02 AM
Tom's denial over his infection is adorable, wonder how long it will last
9/2/25, 9:19 PM
Standout writing!!

9/3/25, 12:06 AM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) Thank you x
9/2/25, 10:37 PM
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the fantasy. Stay tuned for the Exhibitionist Cowboy.
9/2/25, 12:54 PM
This was super hot! Loved the exhibitionism, the thrill and risk of public sex, and the way the guys considered and ultimately gave into the POV’s suggestions. Looking forward to seeing more from you. That said, I had trouble following who was speaking during the dialogue. It helps to have a paragraph break every time the dialogue switches who’s speaking.

9/2/25, 10:35 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thanks for the valuable feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the fantasy.
9/2/25, 10:28 PM
I absolutely adored this. Force-of-personality control really gets me every time.
Sep 1, 2025
9/1/25, 9:12 PM
I've been considering trying to join my local gay rugby team (as a not super athletic person) and maybe this is a sign 🔥

9/1/25, 9:28 PM
@[JimsJorts](/user/show/10008527) _fucking go for it._ and if you're not confident in your ability as an athletic person, ask about getting fitter and try to make it a social thing rather than trying to go it alone. ---- also, to the author, it's frickin' great to read something on this website that's really hot and... without malice or cruelty. Sometimes people are just good to each other. And sometimes those people being good to each other are horny rugby jocks.

9/2/25, 9:42 PM
@[JimsJorts](/user/show/10008527) That's really high praise, man, thanks a lot :)

9/2/25, 9:45 PM
@[AAA-9](/user/show/2613724) Glad you liked it! I'm into heavier stuff too, not gonna lie, but I figured why not start with a chill one?
9/1/25, 2:20 AM
SO godamn hot

Elm
9/2/25, 8:40 PM
@[Seakinklets](/user/show/10020055) Thank you!