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1/13/26, 1:19 PM
I feel like this could easily be made into a David Cronenberg movie that I would happily watch. Great premise and start, eager to read the rest. One note, and this is probably the most absurdly critical thing I've ever mentioned in the comment section of a story before, but red wine is (as far as I'm aware) never served chilled or in a bucket of ice. You're thinking of champagne, which generally is served in a bucket of ice because white wines are served chilled. Red wine is served at room temperature or a little below room temperature. Probably the most snobbish thing I've ever said before on the internet, and the only reason I point it out is because the story is really good but I feel like sometimes when I read something right off the bat that doesn't make sense or is factually incorrect, it takes away from my confidence in the author. If it's particularly egregious I usually just stop reading and move on to something else. This was really just a minor incongruity; all the other elements of your writing I thought were really strong, and so it was easily forgiven. Great story idea and concept.
Anonymous
1/13/26, 12:28 PM
Another great chapter. Initially found you on Sofurry and been following you since. It's back up now so you can add the two missing chapters there. Also really liked it when you had images of all the new Orcs. Wish you kept that up.
Jel
1/13/26, 3:11 AM
Wow!

1/13/26, 10:06 AM
@[Jel](/user/show/2623484) Chapter 2 cumming very soon… 😈
1/13/26, 9:39 AM
Another amazing piece of work from the master of drone stories! Really like this one. And as someone with particularly sensitive nips, I really appreciated the details involving them in this one. Always happy to see you on here!
1/13/26, 3:27 AM
I would say have faith in yourself as a writer because this chapter is really good. You have a really good sense of developing the story of this section and that's before AI even enters the picture. Looking forward to reading the next leg of the story.

1/13/26, 8:58 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Well, I wish most people could be as supportive as you. Thank you. I'll do my best. Thank you for reading my story :D. Let's see if I could gather enough motivation to write the next one.
1/12/26, 10:51 PM
That was intense and hot. I like how sinister it is. I would love to see some men dumbed down, reduced to naked apes, or dogs. Something to humiliate them with Arins gift :D

1/13/26, 8:30 AM
@[MindlessDog](/user/show/10009228) Thank you, glad that the intensity of this chapter found an audience. Speaking of dumbing down, :} my plan for the next chapter would revolve around that. But I wont make it sinister like this one, in fact I kinda want to make it goofy and lighthearted :D something to contrast this very dark and disturbing scene. That being said tho.. next chapter is going to be a transitional chapter.. it will have a similar pacing structure as Ch.2. But i dunno, we'll see, if I have enough motivation to approach that.. hehe..
Jan 7, 2026
Ben
1/13/26, 6:24 AM
This was super hot 🥵
1/13/26, 6:24 AM
I enjoyed it quite a bit! My advice for the next chapter would be to take your time and do more details. To me, it felt like the story ended just as they were getting to the good stuff. Nice story though, looking forward to the next chapter!
1/13/26, 5:46 AM
Great story
1/13/26, 5:26 AM
can’t wait for the next installment !!