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Jul 22, 2023
7/27/23, 12:54 PM
Great story! What a fantastic makeover. I love that Adonis Ken is just as connected to his kids as dutiful Dad Steve. Interesting too to see the positive impact of Ken’s perfect genes and fabulousness on future Asher.
7/27/23, 12:39 PM
Shame this wasn’t continued
7/27/23, 7:57 AM
It's been a long time since I was as...yes..._enthralled_ by a character as I am by Josiah. I feel privileged to be in on the whys and hows of his thoughts and actions, carried along by the author's skill and attention to detail. As Matthew is being added to the mix and we have yet to get back to Sal, I hope there will be a goodly amount of story to come. Bravo!
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7/27/23, 7:04 AM
Absolutely amazing story! Keep going!
7/27/23, 6:45 AM
What can I say, that was a great ending to a really well crafted story! I loved the world building and detail you threw into amid Bryces sexy adventures. Really well done!
7/27/23, 6:42 AM
Another great chapter in the story. Can't wait to see how this plays out!
7/27/23, 5:48 AM
It's getting even more hot!
7/27/23, 5:36 AM
Uh oh. Stephen became proof of concept for something that can speed up making more beefed up submissive wrestlers without shattering their minds entirely. Hot stuff! Great little surprise.
7/27/23, 3:11 AM
Good to see your name again popping up! I love your stories!
7/22/23, 9:30 AM
I am not sure if I like it or not. I love the way you write and it's hot, what is happening. But I don't like a setting. I am very agains bully getting his way and winning. It is not my book and probably by the point you read it, you would be more than halfway through next chapter, but wat I would like to see is for Matt to take control of both Eddie and his family. Just saying. And as I said those are just my preferences, so write how you like. We will enjoy the ride. Btw I still remember when Matt said to his older brother not to get involved, so Eddie calling Matt coward for calling brother for help is a lie. So I hope he will have a courage to turn the tide in wis winning way.

7/22/23, 2:01 PM
@[Iriefall](/user/show/10019488) I would also like a scenario like this. It would be interesting to see that kind of twist where Matt gets control over Eddie, his father and his brother. But as it is now, Matt doesn't want to use his family for his pleasure, he just wants to free them from Eddie's control, so in my opinion, there are still some things that need to happen that lead him to the point of wanting to keep his family under this state of slavery.

7/27/23, 2:46 AM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) I mean… do we know that? If he IS a coward maybe he is getting angry that his “bully” is doing all the things he WISH he could do? Maybe he is jealous?