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9/22/23, 12:26 AM
This was super hot. The slow and steady transformation was sexy!

9/22/23, 1:05 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

4/12/24, 5:15 AM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) great story. would have loved more detail about Jim's transformation. Wearing servants clothes and doing the tasks

6/15/25, 6:59 AM
@TheSatanScully @[JaAdms](/user/show/10011497) First, i love this story! i particularly liked the way the good doctor planned and implemented his long term plan for transforming and enslaving Jimmy. i appreciate that the Master has indeed contributed to many good things in Jimmy's life, helping him to feel so much more secure and happy. Still, like JaAdms i would have liked longer perhaps more technical inductions, and more detail about the content and approach taken in the DVDs. Like Jimmy i get a lot of pleasure from this sort of "guided meditation", so the longer and more detailed the better! Of course there is also the consideration that the more i like a story, the longer i want it to be. For that reason i am fervently hoping for additional chapters!!

6/18/25, 5:31 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Hey, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I doubt I'll do more chapters of this story but I've been thinking of rewriting it sometime in the future to add more detail and depth to some of the events, as well as play more with both how Carter operates, of course he brings Jimmy a lot of positives in his life because Carter is a fixer at heart, even if he's kind of a cold sociopath, but also to expand a bit on what went on in this year long process, yes, DVDs included!

7/18/25, 9:44 PM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) Hello Sir, i just started my 'binge' reading of your stories. i thought it appropriate that i start at the beginning, so just re-read this chapter. i realize that my original comment didn't give it its appropriate accolades. Yes, i did say i loved this story, but i didn't say enough about why. The overall plan for enslaving Jimmy and the detail of every hypnosis training session was perfect! True, if the hypnosis sessions were real and not just a fictional representation, then the sessions would have been longer. Still what you did write for each session was beautifully tailored to work within the overall training plan. My limited experience as an avid but amateur hypnosis subject using and re-using audio training sessions ad infinitum has shown me that hypnosis (at least for me) takes a lot of time and repetition. Everything you wrote and the enslavement plan you devised feels very real to me because you clearly understand that this kind of therapy takes a lot of time. It shows me that you indeed know a lot about hypnosis (at least as a very educated amateur and perhaps more). The DVD training sessions did remain a black box, which i would indeed have liked to have a better understanding, but summarizing them in that way worked just fine for this story.
Jul 16, 2025
7/18/25, 7:47 PM
Excellent to see this story resurface. :+1: "At times he jerked off in the gym lockers while making baby cooing sounds or sometimes sucking his thumb." (triggered a little whimper of baby babble out of me) Glad to know you're still around, lil guy!

7/18/25, 9:26 PM
@[babiedboi](/user/show/191294) yep still here..like a diaper rash haha. Been ages..email me and lets catch up
7/18/25, 9:22 PM
I'm loving this story. Keep it coming!
7/18/25, 8:41 PM
I hope this story gets more parts!
7/18/25, 8:24 PM
Hot!
7/18/25, 6:39 PM
You own my balls with this story keep waiting for the next chapters!
7/18/25, 6:24 PM
Wish there were more stories like this ❤️
7/18/25, 6:04 PM
Oh..I didn't expect Mastermind origin is like that also surprised Agent Sleeper is the first lost boy,I really enjoyed reading it.The cliffhanger make me eager to read the next chapter,I hope Mastermind is okay,looking forward for the next chapter. :D
7/10/25, 3:31 AM
Wait, is this a repeat of the last chapter? It’s slightly different, but ultimately the same. Dunno if this was intentional. Still a hot read

7/18/25, 4:49 PM
@[Tusky](/user/show/10018152) it's sort of reinforcing, upping the ante.
7/18/25, 2:43 PM
I love Flowers for Algernon, and have since I read the abridged version in high school (elided all the sex scenes), and then the full version later, and this is a great take on that. Plus, epistolary stories are such a great literary device, and the diary style here really worked well. I suppose this is reverse-FfA, but it's definitely in the mold! The story was both really erotic and very well written. Love that I found it!