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12/1/25, 3:34 AM
Hot story! Would Chris have actually let him upload the video or did Chris just let him think it was his idea to not upload yet?

12/1/25, 5:10 AM
@[Max Lode](/user/show/338113) I love a little ambiguity. But I think Chris is very calculating and got exactly what he wanted.
12/1/25, 5:04 AM
Please continue this. I really want to see what happens next. This story is so good.
12/1/25, 3:43 AM
Takes too long to get to the action of the story.
J.J.
12/1/25, 2:24 AM
Nice. (Although I was almost hoping for a more twisted ending ;) )

12/1/25, 3:24 AM
@J.J. Tell me more ? Hehe
12/1/25, 3:10 AM
Sorry I disappeared. I've actually been working on a novel for about ten months and it is getting published! but it is just in the line edit process...so...its like seven months away...and is not mind control...but it does have a werewolf! I will finish this over the next couple weeks for everyone that liked it.
12/1/25, 12:19 AM
Loved this chapter and the concept! It was a great read and I think you did an excellent job. If you have the time, I would love to see an additional chapter or two. Both Alan's life and Oscar's life would be cool to explore and see if they ever crossed paths again.
Nov 30, 2025
11/30/25, 11:42 PM
Nice story! I really enjoyed it and hope you expand on it more in the future!
11/30/25, 10:30 PM
This is such a strong start to the story, can't wait to see how you develop it, if it's anything like your other works I know I'm gonna love it!!!
Anonymous
11/30/25, 9:36 PM
Can't wait for more!
11/30/25, 9:04 PM
🥵🥵🥵🥵 love it