Recent Comments

Siddhartha
3/3/23, 2:01 AM
What a helluva writer you are! Just gripped from the first line... This was the first story I read... Hooked... will keep coming back for more...

6/13/23, 9:39 PM
@Siddhartha Great to know this story still packs a punch! Glad you enjoyed it.
Jun 13, 2023
Martin
6/13/23, 8:12 PM
That was .... amazingly hot!
6/13/23, 6:29 PM
Please Continue!
6/13/23, 6:08 PM
Absolutely loved this this! More raunchy rubber skinheads, please.
Anonymous
10/24/18, 5:12 AM
bring chapter 3!!! :D

James
6/13/23, 5:54 PM
@Anonymous Oh this really needs a chapter 3 and more.
6/9/23, 1:37 AM
I continue to love the way you write this, and if I had one tiny criticism, it's that while 99% of the time you show, for some reason you just out-and-out tell us Ethan's strange and contradictory attributes/powers, when I think the subtle acts of gazing into his eyes or suddenly changing their minds you already do is enough for us to figure it out for ourselves. I like figuring out what's up with these fun supernatural characters, so it's a little disappointing (but just a little!) to have the game given up for us. But again: bangin' stories in a fun world!

6/13/23, 5:30 PM
Funny you should mention, @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419). In some now-deleted comments on Ethan’s first instalment, there was some confusion as to how his powers worked or what was going on, so I decided in *Laundromat* to just lean into explicit explanation as a narrative device and try to mine it for humour. Individual mileage on that idea may vary, I suppose. Regardless, thank you for your comments! I’m glad the series is working for you on the whole.
6/9/23, 12:35 AM
I love this series and Ethan so much. There's something almost sinister about Ethan's combination of traits, as if a trickster god had placed a particularly subtle curse on him. I adore it. It's also got this fun little slapstick/farce thing going for it. Anyone who was giving you low marks for writing must have been confused at the lack of typos or bad grammar in the story....

6/13/23, 5:28 PM
Eh, there’s no accounting for personal taste. I’ve got no grudge; just enough vanity to make a public plea for clarity ;) @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419)
6/4/23, 1:37 AM
This was so damn cute. I had a blast reading it, and I think you may have had a blast writing it. ;-)

6/13/23, 5:27 PM
Thanks, @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419)! This was a fun one to piece together for sure. Glad you enjoyed :)
Apr 18, 2013
6/13/23, 1:37 PM
You failed to remove the slaves body hair as all slaves are hairless!