There are so many wonderful lines in this chapter that firmly declare the nature of the growing connection between Marcus and Caleb, and more generally important aspects of all good Dom/sub and Master/slave relationships. "Because despite everything, despite the pain, the frustration, the cage, he’d never felt more alive. More used. More owned. More loved." “Your focus on your release weakens your worship. Only when you forget yourself completely — only when you exist for Me and My cock alone — will you become who you are meant to be.” "Marcus showed him, week after week, [...] the only thing that mattered: To honor Him with devotion. To serve Him selflessly, sweetly, and fully." One line by Marcus i adamantly refute is this one: “Service isn’t about your pleasure, faggot, it’s about Mine.” Personally this one line would weaken a D/s connection for me because it demonstrates that in spite of everything, Marcus is almost exclusively interested in his own pleasure. He seems to lack an understanding that submission, obedience, and especially service are all great sources of pleasure for any true submissive. To me it seems Marcus is training his slave to be empty, blank, emotionless, and unhesitatingly responsive. i think in this modern context both Dom and sub, Master and slave, need positive constructive experiences and outcomes from their relationship. They each complete the other. To be fair to the author getting to know someone deeply takes a lot of time and attention. There is also a lot in the story to indicate that love is a strong component of their connection. i like to believe that Marcus words often don't reflect his real and ultimate intent or feelings, that he does love and cherish his slave. Downplaying this concern is easy when so much of the story reflects the kind of D/s or M/s relationship i fantasize about. For that once again i thank the author for sharing his imagination and smooth writing skills which vividly describes these characters and their relationship. This story is definitely one of my favorites!

It varies by chapter which of these two annoys me more. Neither is likeable, you need Liam to be this stupid for the story but it just comes across as the special needs kid being bullied by a piece of shit jock.

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Exceptional story -- and I loved the images.

Super fun and hot story! Thanks and Happy Holidays!❤️👍😛😛😛🎄🎄

absolutely brilliant. if the hypno eyes had caused one of the brothers to baby babble or call the Daddy of Crime 'da da' there would have definitely been an unintended accident for this humble reader. :wink:

Great work. Are we missing a bit? Seems like there was a sauna blow job we didn’t get to read?

Caleb has learned well to submit, obey, and serve. The last step Marcus has proclaimed is complete surrender. The preparation for that step will ease Caleb to the edge and ensure that without doubt or hesitation the boy will make his last decision into lifetime servitude -- no will power or motivation to do anything but what Marcus desires without thought or hesitation -- complete and utter enslavement. This is not the harsh hateful forced non-consensual slavery of history. This was Marcus applying his intelligence and Dominant personality to slowly remove all sense of ego and independence from Caleb, so slowly that Caleb had almost no sense of the power shift. Why does that feel so wrong and so right at the same time? I could use a lot of counseling to help me sort this out. i wonder if Marcus would be willing to help me with this? Thanks so much to the author for opening my mind so vividly to new perspectives and possibilities.

LETS GO I HAVE BEEN WAITING SO LONG!!

@ShadyPump Amazing part 3. Thanks for this great story. I hope there’s more of this story coming. So hot!!