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bks2
5/7/23, 10:44 PM
As a stage show fan myself this was exceptional. Loved getting into Mike's perspective of it—didn't expect to find such a well-crafted character voice in erotic fiction, of all places. Well done and looking forward to the rest!

5/8/23, 12:49 AM
@[bks2](/user/show/975759) Thanks! Please check in as you make your way through as I really appreciate reactions!
5/7/23, 11:25 PM
Who knew fascism could be so hot! Honestly, if life under crumpled horn snorksck, was anything like this. I wouldn’t have bitched so much. This is my kind of (reality warping) dictator errr president! I love this story. It really is on of my favorites on this site. And wouldn’t this make a great horror-porn? It would be so hot! And freaky too! But mainly hot!
5/7/23, 9:01 PM
I am harder than hard, after reading your story, and I remain on my hunger! You can't stop this story, there, it's impossible, let three raging, smelly, chewing, smoking redneck wolves in their boots, left them in a city! Redneck is for Country! Keep writing my man!
Anonymous
5/7/23, 12:41 PM
I enjoyed EVERY. SINGLE. CHAPTER of this series. WELL DONE! BRAVO!

5/7/23, 5:09 PM
@Anonymous So glad you’re enjoying, mate!! There’s plenty more to come
Lampshade15
5/7/23, 2:35 PM
Hot story! Nice to see a power bottom take control and mold someone into his perfect bull top. The stepbro angle was pretty hot too, I wonder what daddy would think of the whole situation?

peachy
5/7/23, 3:16 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) thank you i thought the same thing! we might have to find out hehe…

Lampshade15
5/7/23, 3:49 PM
@[peachy](/user/show/10029966) Nice, great minds think alike lol. Can't wait to find out more!
5/7/23, 1:45 PM
I just keep finding favorites in your work.
5/7/23, 5:27 AM
I'm a really big fan of many of Ng5's drone stories and drone stories in general but the loss of individuality has always been a sticking point for me. I like the was this circumvents that. Excited to see what more you come up with.

5/7/23, 1:39 PM
@[xXxMonsterFuckerxXx](/user/show/83490) Thank you for your response. Loss of identity or no space for willing integration has been something nagging at me too. It's been something I've been thinking about for a while in Ng5's stories and a few other drone stories. This is the answer I came to for Ng5's world after talking with him. He too is looking forward to seeing what comes of this narrative, so you're in good company.
5/7/23, 9:37 AM
I’m really enjoying this series. There are a few bits I’m not quite sure I follow but overall, it’s insanely hot and thought provoking all at the same time! Can’t wait for the next part.

5/7/23, 12:43 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Next part should be out very soon. Hope you like it :) Thank you!
5/7/23, 10:50 AM
I wouldn't even have mentioned it but you seemed so surprised -- in the comment starting here, and the previous chapter. Mostly I'm saving my real thoughts until I finish and have the full view :)
5/7/23, 4:43 AM
Applejack is a whiny little man that you made detestable, but you've written Cav as an entitled, snobbish, vain prick. I like the way my mind has painted Cav's face and body, but I dislike him intensely. And I dislike Applejack now too. If that wasn't your intent....well.

5/7/23, 10:32 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) My intent was to show their distinct personalities and how they resolve their internal disagreement within the power structure they’re forming. Cav comes off too harsh in this sequence, but AppleJack is spoiled and unjustifiably angry — both characters redeem themselves as the story goes on. Not everybody on a team gets along.