Recent Comments

Kippers
4/26/23, 11:59 PM
The overuse of hyperbole became annoyingly distracting. Exponential enhancements also made no sense. A racist character is one thing, but having a black character proclaim, "take my chocolate rod," only implies the author's own racism. A 14 x 9 x 9 penis? You really think that imagery made your story better? As it seems you are still writing, I hope you take these editorial criticisms to heart. The plot of your story had great merit, but it took three readings to get through this chapter, with the nonsensical ever-increasing enhancements to the victims.
4/26/23, 10:41 PM
This story has so much potential. Given that it’s now directly the Eden Academy, there’s lots of possibilities to tell the influence it has had to the men of that world. Big guys all over the word that are alumni of the school that know how to submit and serve. Just plenty of possibilities to introduce characters all over that can interact with the MC, or have the MC see for himself the joy in others’ submission.
4/24/23, 11:26 PM
Excellent start, you're hitting all the best triggers within the diaper fetish. :blush:

4/26/23, 9:29 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Thanks man! Since this chapter was pretty slow I tried to really accentuate the embarrassment of the whole situation, make it a little bit of a slow burn. Glad its hitting the right notes for you! :grin:

4/26/23, 9:44 PM
@[EKXD](/user/show/10012322) You know I'm an absolute sucker for diapers + medical humiliation!
4/26/23, 8:34 PM
I am IN LOVE with this story lol

4/26/23, 8:46 PM
@[ForgottenCradle](/user/show/911705) Thanks 😁
Elm
4/26/23, 7:53 PM
Great open ended ending!
Gingcub
4/26/23, 6:02 PM
Yes please :) I really hope his big cock ends up locked in permanent chastity!

4/26/23, 6:05 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) Hehehe…love the mindset…we’ll have to see😈
JazzyServantLuvr
4/26/23, 3:12 PM
Really looking forward to the next installment - hopefully soon to be published!
4/26/23, 2:08 PM
Great One, I would really like Bruce to keep most of his personality just adding fanatical levels of devotion and loyalty to the Boss, but excited to see what happens anyways
4/26/23, 1:56 PM
I’m so glad that fucker finally got what was coming to him. Very nice conclusion.
Elm
4/26/23, 1:28 PM
What a great story, took me so long to finish due to how hot it is. The way his mind changes with just a few words is just *chefs kiss*👨‍🍳