Recent Comments

9/3/25, 9:45 AM
Holy hell, this is so bloody hot!!! Love your twisted mind!
9/3/25, 3:09 AM
Hot, keep the story coming! Hot to make Tracy permanently female!
9/3/25, 1:51 AM
This is EVIL...and I LOVE it!
9/3/25, 1:26 AM
I wish I had a therapist like this!
Jeen
9/3/25, 12:56 AM
Agreed that the ending is very random and tacked-on feeling for such a kinky and hot story. I guess a romantic ending is ok but you have to make it make sense as a resolution and this doesn’t. Not to mention that it throws everything kinky and hot in the bin, this is gay spiral stories not generic gay love stories

Jeen
9/3/25, 1:12 AM
@Jeen Also agreed that the romance thing feels very hollow when you realize that Josh is literally an unrepentant rapist who ends up with a lovey dovey ending as vanilla boyfriends with his unwitting victim that he hides the truth from. Not even that fictional/fantasy nonconsent isn’t ok, but that in-universe it’s treated like a bad thing when Josh tries to undo it and only kind of succeeds, but then it’s swept under the rug in the end anyways. Like why should we want them to have a happy ending together, how does Josh deserve that after what he’s done?
Aug 31, 2025
9/3/25, 1:02 AM
Tom's denial over his infection is adorable, wonder how long it will last
9/2/25, 9:19 PM
Standout writing!!

9/3/25, 12:06 AM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) Thank you x
9/2/25, 10:37 PM
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the fantasy. Stay tuned for the Exhibitionist Cowboy.
9/2/25, 12:54 PM
This was super hot! Loved the exhibitionism, the thrill and risk of public sex, and the way the guys considered and ultimately gave into the POV’s suggestions. Looking forward to seeing more from you. That said, I had trouble following who was speaking during the dialogue. It helps to have a paragraph break every time the dialogue switches who’s speaking.

9/2/25, 10:35 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thanks for the valuable feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the fantasy.