Recent Comments

3/28/23, 6:09 PM
Am I sick for thinking that the janitor thing actually happend and he's subconsciously suppressing it to the point he's reliving it as dreams? Esp. with the panic episode and all that. (I know that's not the case, per your reply, but that's what I thought after reading the woke up yelling from a nightmare situation) Idk, that'd be both hot, traumatic, and would drive the story to a completely different spiral where he eventually confront the janitor again, and depending on if he has emotional support (coach & sammy etc.), wreck him. (Headcanon) I'm sick.

3/28/23, 6:31 PM
@[CieL](/user/show/748750) That’s a hot scenario, but yeah, not what I’m going for. I think I kinda messed up writing the dream. It’s not supposed to be scary; it’s supposed to be erotic and hot, leaning into a bit of degradation kink, contrasting the slovenly janitor with the clean cut jock. I don’t think Luke is even afraid, since he could easily fight the janitor off. I’ll have to give it another pass through.
Jack
3/28/23, 6:14 PM
Yes! More more more more more!
3/28/23, 5:45 PM
Mooooore ❤️
Anonymous
3/28/23, 5:38 PM
You definitely need to continue this! This was so well written and so hot. The pacing was incredible, creating a nice slow burn without it feeling the least bit tedious. I can’t wait to see what you come up with next!
3/28/23, 5:32 PM
This was great! Extremely well written and so hot!
3/28/23, 4:01 PM
You did a fine job of detailing the transformations and working out the practical details involved. The brief cuckolding scene added to the overall impact.
3/28/23, 3:14 PM
Please keep this going it’s so hot
3/28/23, 3:03 PM
Oh man, I read this SO fast - nicely, nicely done! I love the insight into Luke’s childhood, and the sensitivity you brought to the depravity he needs in his life. Hot, sexy, smart — I love this series!
3/28/23, 2:30 PM
Super hot. Is this a one off, or might there be a part 2?

Anonymous
3/28/23, 2:41 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thanks. No continuation is planned, but I might come back to some of these themes in another story sometime.
3/28/23, 2:09 PM
Hello story from 4 years ago, I hope you get an update again. things were starting to get even better I can tell