Recent Comments

3/21/23, 2:36 PM
Loving this!
3/21/23, 2:05 PM
Fun, fun chapter! I could have used some more erotic tension, if you can believe it. Something about narrating the logistics of their walk through campus and coming up with the plan distracted me from the libido of the scene, and it seemed like they were too coherent/sober for people under the influence of narcotics. You know me — I’m all about consistency of vibe in my storytelling. You’ve got me hooked though, and I will absolutely be plowing through the rest of this series in short order!
3/21/23, 11:36 AM
Ahhhhh. Please. Do. Not. Stop.
Anonymous
3/18/23, 8:31 PM
And then along came Zeus! This story just keeps getting better and better, every branch adding its own twist on what it means to be a slut. I was hoping for breeding to show up and maybe some cum inflation to follow. After all, all that babybatter has to go somewhere! Looking forward to the author reveal too, I want to see if my hunch is correct. I have a guess on how the story might possibly end too but Im keeping that to myself.

3/20/23, 6:21 PM
@Anonymous I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far, haha! And I'm curious to know how you think the story might end, too — the final chapters are going up today, so let me know if your hunch ended up right... 👀

Anonymous
3/21/23, 10:50 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I was so very wrong! See anon in final chapter
3/20/23, 2:17 AM
This whole "living engine" concept has such tremendous potential I'm surprised it hasn't been done before. Who's to say, for instance, that psychic energy couldn't be used to power other systems outside of propulsion? And that ending -- please tell me I'm not crazy for thinking it looks like a deliberate sequel hook!

3/21/23, 9:15 AM
@[Ar El](/user/show/10034797) I remember a fictional art with story that used this concept. Though rather than a space ship engine, it was the driver of a gundam-like mech being used in the same manner as its energy source. If I recall correctly the gundam had sentience (or artificial intelligence) and kept its 'driver' trapped inside and in a state of perpetual arousal with no release to fuel itself from the energy of his lust. Also keeping him alive in that state.. forever. So not an unfamiliar concept to me, but it does seem rather uncommon. Nice story either way ^^
3/21/23, 8:47 AM
Really hot story and nice twist in the story
3/21/23, 6:12 AM
Loved this. Nice hedonistic edge to it while also keeping the mind control elements. And the writing was top-notch.
3/21/23, 4:41 AM
I'm quite excited to see more of this when you have time! Your work so far as been *exquisite* and lovely and I live it.
Anonymous
3/21/23, 3:20 AM
one of the best stories I've read! Great work 👏
Haruspex
3/21/23, 2:59 AM
If this story doesn't win the gold I'm going to personally dox every member of this site to give them a firm disapproving stare about their lack of taste. Holy shit, I have no idea how you managed to make a multi-chapter gay erotica story have a plot and characters that were actually compelling and genuinely engaging to read about. I mean, I do, because narrative structures and characterizations and blah blah theory formality bullshit, but still--it's noteworthy because it's a rarity. Win or not, I really can't wait til the end of this contest, man. I'm gonna be keeping my eyes peeled for your future work. Cheers!