Recent Comments

5/24/23, 10:09 PM
This is my third time reading the series; it's become one of my go-to's for written erotica! Thank you , my friend!!!
Whitey
5/24/23, 9:25 PM
Wow! This is awesome! Great story. Love your writing style
5/7/23, 8:21 PM
Perfect, as all your previous stories. Love middle-eastern characters, they are too rare on this site, so pure pleasure to see that you make the choice of taking one of them as main character. Thanks can't wait to read the next chapter ! (I was just a bit surprised by Ahmed foreskin. Like all Muslim men, Iraqis are circumcised and this is an important part of their male identity).

5/7/23, 10:44 PM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) Thanks! No matter how much you revise, something always slips by. This was from an earlier draft when the character was different. I’ll fix it.

5/10/23, 10:04 AM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) Just wanted to add, I loved your story. I read it in the original French, which is actually my first language.

5/18/23, 3:34 PM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) Non ça n'est pas possible ton anglais est trop bon ?!!! Je suis impressioné ! N'hésite pas à m'envoyer un email ;)

5/18/23, 8:44 PM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) Je n’ai commencé à apprendre l’anglais qu’à l’adolescence. Par la suite, par contre, j’ai fait mes études en littérature et écriture en anglais. J’habite Montréal.

5/24/23, 8:25 PM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) C'est incroyable, tu écris mieux qu'un vrai anglophone :sweat_smile: Je comprends mieux, un français aurait eu tendance à choisir un maghrébin dans le récit mais au Canada vous cotoyez des moyens-orientaux plutôt

5/24/23, 8:42 PM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) En fait non, j'ai plusieurs collègues de travail qui sont maghrébins et aucun qui sont iraquiens. Il y a un peu du hasard dans mon choix. Mais Montréal est très cosmopolite, presque toutes les nationalités y sont representées.
5/22/23, 8:37 PM
A good beginning, but I'm actually interested in continuing an earlier story of yours if you'll let me?

Willie Cici
5/23/23, 2:46 AM
@[master1](/user/show/534520) Feel free. I can't wait to read it.

5/24/23, 8:35 PM
@Willie Cici Ok, it will be the Knight and Horner story, hopefully I write to your standards.
thiago
5/24/23, 7:37 PM
exelent ...i love this !!!more thong more thong
5/24/23, 6:32 PM
Still eager to read the conclusion to this.
5/24/23, 5:40 PM
I just wanna say I already know this is gonna be great.
5/24/23, 4:40 PM
You need yo keep the story going but Jeremy deserves to have a cock just say 6 inches. I failed to add, Jeremy needs to remain hairless aside from his head as his brother cock slave.
Lavender Lad
5/23/23, 11:40 PM
Very hot though I felt that there were alot of repeated sentences and padding which made me skip around a little. Could definitely use a little trimming down and it would be gold.

5/24/23, 6:07 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Thank you. I appreciate every comment to improve my writing!

5/24/23, 1:43 PM
@[FantasyWhispers](/user/show/921620) On the contrary, I find the power of your text in the details you describe. It's a change from one-shots where the construction of the characters and scenes is botched to get to the sex scene immediately. Well done, it's a great job!

5/24/23, 3:10 PM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) Thank you really much. I've read lots of stories. I've always thought that many of them always needed a lot of imagination to immerse fully in the scenery (and very often they are just sex). I decided to start writing stories in which the atmosphere and details, such as bodies or expressions, are the core, to better help the reader's imagination.
5/24/23, 3:03 PM
Nicely written, great concept!