Recent Comments

5/22/23, 3:04 PM
As a fan of good endings let me just say: GOD DAMNIT AHMED! For once in your life DON'T be so useful and resourceful. Okay, I got it out of my chest. I have to say I enjoyed reading this story very much. It was a very creative use of a classic trope and I could feel the tension of every scene being all or nothing for Ernest. It was interesting to see how Ernest's conscience has had declined as he gained more and more power and control (even if he owes almost everything to Ahmed). I do feel the ending was too Deus ex machinad but I have yet to read all of your stories so I can only look at it from a standalone setting rather than a shared universe. Either way, the Dr had been stopped and I am happy for it. You did a great job and I wait for your next story :)

5/22/23, 5:45 PM
@Reader Thanks for your comments! The Domination universe presupposes that if mind control was actually achievable, it would be in the hands of big players who would intervene when a spontaneous independent discovery occurs. So the epilogue in this story is not really part of the main arc, it’s more like ok, Dr. Wilshire’s story is over, he didn’t succeed at avoiding corruption. The end. Oh, btw, instead of a happily ever after, a big player took the drug from him. In that sense, it’s not a deus ex machina because the plot is already resolved by then.

5/23/23, 2:27 PM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) Ohhhhhh okay Knowing the context of the over arc does make it a lot more logical. I have to say that the permise you have just proposed sounds really clever so if you'll excuse me, I'm going to do some reading now ;)
Willie Cici
5/23/23, 2:53 AM
I loved this whole series! Hot and well written.

5/23/23, 2:16 PM
@Willie Cici Thanks a lot, Willie! You’re the most prolific of us all.
5/16/23, 12:32 PM
Jack, each new chapter gets me higher and higher like a drug. You are the Master of stories. Thank you.

5/23/23, 1:27 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) More than welcome bud.
5/16/23, 9:33 PM
🍆💦🍆💦🍆💦🤪 I want to be Sammy’s bitch.

5/23/23, 1:26 PM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Right?
Steve
5/23/23, 1:23 PM
I too dream of being Sammy’s bitch, but if you consider the brain these stories actually come from, Jack Parker is the Master I yearn to serve.

5/23/23, 1:26 PM
@Steve :smirk:
5/23/23, 12:07 PM
This is so hot. I’m eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
5/23/23, 11:44 AM
This is intensely hot and well-described!
5/23/23, 10:07 AM
Really love this series! Can't wait to see it go further.
5/23/23, 9:38 AM
That was great, and I hope this story will continue!
Superbelt
5/23/23, 8:57 AM
I am glad you changed the end so that it could have more chapters. It is really hot, it deserves to be longer. Looking forward to next chapter.