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3/10/23, 3:37 PM
Wow. This a fantastic first chapter. I love both characters. I love Brook and all of the details about him. I love the narrator too, already. Will there be more? I really hope so.
3/10/23, 3:18 PM
This is a clever and surprising idea. 3 levels into the story now, and each decision involving the book that Xavier makes causes a split version of him but every change made by the book affects every other version of him. This is so novel and interesting and exciting. I love that it’s a choose your own adventure where I want to read every branch. Especially because they are so hot. I’m especially a fan of big dicks, so this level (3) in particular is really hot to me. Every one of the people that Xavier encountered all have big dicks and reading how he reacts to all of them is super hot. I’m excited for more and very curious how many levels you’ll do. Each one is more work if you keep up the pattern. It’s already an impressive amount of writing.
3/10/23, 2:55 PM
Holy hell, you may have outdone yourself here. The way you described the ink and metal and silicone flowing from one to the other, corrupting not only the body but the mind and even the soul. This is mastery. You should be incredibly proud of yourself here.
3/10/23, 2:27 PM
Great addition, and teasing of so much more to come! 😍
3/10/23, 1:37 PM
Can't wait to read more
3/10/23, 1:13 PM
Great first chapter!!!
3/10/23, 1:01 PM
This is so good to re-visit. You’re fiction is warped and wonderful.
3/10/23, 11:57 AM
Oh geez. And now, because of all the drinking, he won’t remember he did this. Oh man.
Lampshade15
3/10/23, 11:38 AM
This is off to a really good start!