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5/9/23, 8:23 PM
This is turning into an excellent series! Really hoping he continues to move on to other jocks.
5/8/23, 3:38 PM
As Martin said, "Exactly all my kink buttons pressed" For me too. Having a maintenance mode, is great. And hoping as it did, Master still desired it, Yes Master does. with a press, Resume program.

5/8/23, 4:34 PM
@[robbotg99x4you](/user/show/141754) I'm happy to have pressed your button(s). :grin:

5/9/23, 8:11 PM
@[Touko](/user/show/10036273) Thank you, Looking forward to more.
5/9/23, 7:40 PM
Ryan’s definitely getting him hooked, won’t be long now til he’s joining him at the gym in some Of his gear, and then to wrestling practice 😈
5/9/23, 7:08 PM
This is what I have been searching online for, but in real life
5/7/23, 10:38 PM
Wow, that was a great buildup and the pictures at the end really brought it home. Fantastic, can't wait to read what's nexr.

5/9/23, 6:24 PM
@Blufur Thanks, coming soon.
5/8/23, 12:02 AM
Amazing as always! I love how Ahmed constantly fluctuated between awareness and unawareness. This is exactly why the "Help! I've lost control of my experiment!" concept needs to be this upcoming story contest. It would mean potentially seeing more stories like this. Your stories never fail; keep doing your thing!

5/9/23, 6:24 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Thanks! It’s so sad it’s not the theme. I would have entered it for the contest for sure.
Sebastián Apollo
5/8/23, 12:11 AM
Brilliant work! Not only is it insanely hot and, as the other commenters pointed out, the beautiful AI-generated work is a great touch, but also very well-written and maintains a good flow throughout. And while I understand that it must be difficult to keep your hands off beautiful Ahmed, I do hope that Dr. Wilshire gets his comeuppance. I will eagerly wait and see!

5/9/23, 6:23 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) For what happens to Dr. Wilshire, that is a special surprise…
5/8/23, 3:20 AM
The slight awareness at the end coupled with that final manipulated choice was so hot, especially with the doctor’s descent into moral sloth. Awesome story, hope to see part 2!

5/9/23, 6:22 PM
@[Yourmind123](/user/show/221272) It’s just a question of approval at this stage. But once written, I had 4 chapters, not 2 as I originally thought. Because I had more ideas of course.
Martin
5/8/23, 11:46 AM
This is marvellous! 5 for hot, mc and writing. And I'm not easy on my 5s... :)

5/9/23, 6:20 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks Martin! I’m honoured by your comment. I just uploaded Ch. 2 of 4. The other chapters are written, just need editing. Hope you continue to like it.
Anonymous
5/8/23, 11:09 PM
This was a well crafted Mafisto story, particularly in the way it treaded the line between the #clueless and #aware subgenres, the way it attentively described Ahmed's body, and the way it depicted the "mafistophelian" temptation of the doctor. Still, one eagerly awaits the day when, just as Dr. Wilshire slips over his boundaries and "falls," this founding author of the MC genre will produce a story that fully "falls" into the dark psychological and erotic spaces of #aware stories. How would this story read if written from Ahmed's perspective once he realizes he's ingested Obezol?

5/9/23, 6:14 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! I write stories like the ones I like to read, and I don’t usually like pov-controlled stories. But I’m expanding my range a little so who knows?