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5/7/23, 10:38 PM
Wow, that was a great buildup and the pictures at the end really brought it home. Fantastic, can't wait to read what's nexr.

5/9/23, 6:24 PM
@Blufur Thanks, coming soon.
5/8/23, 12:02 AM
Amazing as always! I love how Ahmed constantly fluctuated between awareness and unawareness. This is exactly why the "Help! I've lost control of my experiment!" concept needs to be this upcoming story contest. It would mean potentially seeing more stories like this. Your stories never fail; keep doing your thing!

5/9/23, 6:24 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Thanks! It’s so sad it’s not the theme. I would have entered it for the contest for sure.
Sebastián Apollo
5/8/23, 12:11 AM
Brilliant work! Not only is it insanely hot and, as the other commenters pointed out, the beautiful AI-generated work is a great touch, but also very well-written and maintains a good flow throughout. And while I understand that it must be difficult to keep your hands off beautiful Ahmed, I do hope that Dr. Wilshire gets his comeuppance. I will eagerly wait and see!

5/9/23, 6:23 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) For what happens to Dr. Wilshire, that is a special surprise…
5/8/23, 3:20 AM
The slight awareness at the end coupled with that final manipulated choice was so hot, especially with the doctor’s descent into moral sloth. Awesome story, hope to see part 2!

5/9/23, 6:22 PM
@[Yourmind123](/user/show/221272) It’s just a question of approval at this stage. But once written, I had 4 chapters, not 2 as I originally thought. Because I had more ideas of course.
Martin
5/8/23, 11:46 AM
This is marvellous! 5 for hot, mc and writing. And I'm not easy on my 5s... :)

5/9/23, 6:20 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks Martin! I’m honoured by your comment. I just uploaded Ch. 2 of 4. The other chapters are written, just need editing. Hope you continue to like it.
Anonymous
5/8/23, 11:09 PM
This was a well crafted Mafisto story, particularly in the way it treaded the line between the #clueless and #aware subgenres, the way it attentively described Ahmed's body, and the way it depicted the "mafistophelian" temptation of the doctor. Still, one eagerly awaits the day when, just as Dr. Wilshire slips over his boundaries and "falls," this founding author of the MC genre will produce a story that fully "falls" into the dark psychological and erotic spaces of #aware stories. How would this story read if written from Ahmed's perspective once he realizes he's ingested Obezol?

5/9/23, 6:14 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! I write stories like the ones I like to read, and I don’t usually like pov-controlled stories. But I’m expanding my range a little so who knows?
5/9/23, 10:46 AM
Ahmed's awareness was, for me, the highlight of this story. And the writing was very effective here indeed. Thanks so much. I look forward to a further episode. What I wondered about was the extent to which the Obezol has a limit for Ahmed? There must be something he wouldn't do? Just a thought :)

5/9/23, 6:11 PM
@[Corinthian38](/user/show/38372) Thanks! You’ll have a partial answer in chapter 2
5/9/23, 4:14 PM
Hey, can't wait for the next story!
BikeUrious
5/9/23, 2:49 PM
Glad to see you back! Can't wait to see how Fred will humiliate his bullies more. Maybe they'll become wild office sluts for Fred and the sales team? Also, I really like the more literary type of writing here, it gives more color to the story. Great job, once again!

benedick543
5/9/23, 3:14 PM
@BikeUrious Thanks! I already have that part written out, so I'll publish it in a week or so. And you're not too far off from what I had planned!
Kipper
5/9/23, 11:25 AM
I appreciate the attention to detail regarding the Phallic Brotherhood, but this series lacks detail when it comes to the sex. It's all obligatory and brief, which meets the needs of the Temple, but perhaps not the needs of the horny reader. Also, the nude beach at the southern end of San Onofre State Beach in Gaviota was closed down by the law in 2010, well before this story was ostensibly written. Since then, patrols have routinely ticketed visitors for nudity at this beach. ☹️ With nudity shut down in California, swinging cocks remain welcome at the wide expanse of Gunnison Beach in New Jersey. Stay away from the dunes, or you will most certainly see some worship services. 😉