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4/9/23, 6:42 AM
Amazing writing. Great setup. I wonder if the boys will get to explore their dream of filmmaking. But if their inhibitions keep getting lower, I imagine that it will be quite a different kind of movies they end up making.

4/24/23, 11:13 PM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) Thanks Lytcom, you were great at noticing my foreshadowing.
4/9/23, 4:50 AM
Ooooh this is hot, so very very hot. Love the pov, love the subliminals and the cluelessness and the nature of what is going on. Love the looking and a bit of rubbing of the butt, and the tiny glimpse of hole. The set up is supremely hot and I look forward to seeing more of what comes from this, very sexy, very hot. (Also I wonder if he might see about hiring the father too, for other mechanic work, hehe.) Fun and sexy and I look forward to what happens and how they become more of his good boys. All the pleasure they get from 'playing around' with him and stuff. Maybe even finding that they need him to inspect their holes, haha.

4/24/23, 11:12 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks Heru!
4/24/23, 10:11 PM
Hey there, thumbs up, great story! Such a fun little sexy romp. The set up in this and the other chapters were great. The sex was awesome. I like the nature of the characters and the events they shared and the fun they had. I really like how no actual lives were ruined and such (though the moment of freak out was like of, hmm, off to me) and that they walk away happy. Sexy on the butt stuff. Sexy on the set up. Sexy on the sequence of events. What a fantastic and fun story. Thank you for writing it and posting it! So fun.

4/24/23, 10:26 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Hopefully you had time to cum before the moment of freak out. I liked the contrast of what their true reactions would have been. I wanted to show how, in the absence of real feedback, we can start to forget what is real and what is not, and convince ourselves it's not so bad. Usually these moments where they realize they're naked just gives a bit of funny humiliation, but I thought, what if their reactions gave him pause, and he did not just react by jumping immediately to the reset. Cedric was looking for a remedy to his loneliness when he contacted them, and he enjoyed their companionship, there's empathy there. It just turned into pure lust when he realized he had the power to do that. In the end the empathy is not enough for him to accept losing everything he built.

4/24/23, 10:42 PM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) You make a good point. I think my "humm huh" element was cause it turned on my thinking brain rather than the "this is a sexy story of no consequence" brain. hehe. So like I got pulled out for a tiny bit. I solved that by basically moving back upward to reengage the 'this is an erotic story' element so I could enjoy the sexy times. I can dwell on the other part later, etc etc. I will say that there really was no other decision he could make. There is absolutely no way he would accept the fallout for this, not if he can help it. So yeah, it makes sense he made them only thing of good things for the evening. It was a really sexy story. Oh. I think part of the reason he did the whole "go home the same way you came' was due to them all having girlfriends and such. If like it was a thief who broke in or some random dudes with no attachments to others in the area I think his end choices would be a bit different. It was really enjoyable.
4/24/23, 9:11 PM
I like this ending significantly more! Well done!
4/24/23, 9:08 PM
Dr. Hart needs to be swapped into a 100 year old man who is bedridden. It would be a unique "experiment."
4/24/23, 8:40 PM
Thanks! I loved the idea of dealing with shame in a way I hadn't seen - a transmasc story about compulsory heterosexuality.
4/24/23, 7:47 PM
Great story! Some people are in denial and need some help to see their true self.
Apr 24, 2023
Whitey
4/24/23, 8:08 PM
Great idea!
Apr 24, 2023
LucasT
4/24/23, 7:47 PM
Basically I like your idea and your story is overall okay. But it looks more like a huge summary. I would like to read more about changing robin, describe more of his transformation process, hypnosis, etc. Also for batman. Currently this story is more like a report than a good story.
4/24/23, 7:43 PM
Very Hot story!