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1/30/23, 1:36 AM
Ooof, the tone of this was a kind of masterwork. It's incredibly dark (as befits the DIBS universe) but the just slightly over the top haughtiness of the narrator is undercut by his perversity and horniness in such a way that it makes him a palatable voice for the story. I don't think any other author has pulled this off for me. Normally my reaction to the 'ultra rich depraved slave-owner' pov is so vehement that I cannot enjoy the story, but that didn't happen here and I did find myself boning up and enjoying this dark tale of lust. It's well done and a good effort.
1/30/23, 12:28 AM
Was pleased to see a follow-up to the original. And just like that one this was short, to the point, and hot. :fire:
1/29/23, 10:26 PM
It's very cute story, My problem is I having trouble imagining them in their human forms to me they're a bunch of penises walking around., Except Michael and Vincent, and Michael's parents. Part of the fun of it I guess. I like the whole breakdown of the four corners.
1/29/23, 8:52 PM
Absolutely BRILLIANT. Love the cuckolding scene so much and it was so great to see T & B get some space again. Genius stroke to have Luthor use them to humiliate Bash. Also caught that little Dick/Rico moment and dying to find out how that all plays out.

1/29/23, 9:55 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) THANK YOU, Fanboi!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: THRILLED that U dug the cuckolding scene btwn Jason & Superman....the heat will DEF increase on the cuckolding on S-man when their 3-way heats UP!:fire: Yeah, I have 2 totally give MAD props 2 "a buddy" who inspired me 2 create that Luther/Tim/Bernard/Bash scenario...AHEM (look in a mirror!):mirror: Also hope you enjoyed how Tim exerted "some newfound dominance" 2 impress his Master Daddy Lex....:muscle: BTW....I had gotten 2/3 thru the story b4 I realized that I hadn't inserted any "addt'l sideline stories" 2 provide "some XXXtra spice":hot_pepper:... SO I created "the Dick/Rico moment" so I could E X P A N D upon it during the next chapter!:sparkler: THANKS 4 ALWAYS being SO SUPA-SUPPORTIVE of this story & being SO POSTIVE w/your comments-- VERY GR8FUL!:pray: P.S. I also have "another curveball idea":baseball: brewing up in my mind that might help Bash out of "his humiliation spiral":cyclone:...SO STAY TUNED!!:radio: Have an AWESOME rest of your Sunday/wknd!:sunglasses:
Lampshade15
1/29/23, 9:54 PM
The bit where Detective Garelli whispers into Wallace's ear always gets me.
1/29/23, 9:39 PM
Amazing chapter as always. I especially LOVED Mike actually getting embarrassed for once when getting changed by the Doctor! Like father like son!

1/29/23, 9:47 PM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Thank you! Yes, upon considering the comments from my readers I did conclude that Mike was a bit too stoic and he should show just a little bit of anxiety about his own situation. I couldn't have him go through a medical exam in front of his son without him experiencing a bit of humiliation. Hence the poopy diaper. I kind of wavered about that bit, but ultimately decided that it was Mike's turn to deal with the consequences of being diaper-dependent.
1/29/23, 9:41 PM
The beginning was just W H O L E S O M E! I don't think I would've taken Mike's intent to not potty train Colton at all as well as Colton did. In general he was one brave boy this chapter. Also, for a moment I also fell to the food processor prank, so I know first hand what look Colton had made.

1/29/23, 9:45 PM
@Reader If Mike had actually tried that, he would have had to deal with his first true temper tantrum from Colton. :rofl:
1/29/23, 9:37 PM
Love this chapter, Jack-- HOT!
1/29/23, 9:04 PM
no Inky McGrowl? no pacifier? Daddy fail! Mike earned a punishment from Daddy Roy!

1/29/23, 9:24 PM
@[d-mark](/user/show/926458) Well, you can't have a paci in while the doctor is examining you! As for forgetting to bring Inky, you can blame the author for that. I had Colton forget him precisely so that Colton could miss his presence just as he was pondering how he was going to deal with being treated like a little child all the time. :wink:
1/29/23, 8:12 PM
Excellent chapter as always. But I think Colton is much younger than 4 1/2. ;) Maybe his high chair time will bring out that inner 2 year old.

1/29/23, 8:56 PM
@[babiedboi](/user/show/191294) It's not an exact science, and we have to consider that both Mike and Colton might be holding onto a few toddler and even infantile traits for Colton simply because it brings them pleasure and deepens their bond. Thank you for reading! As much as I appreciate my entire audience, this story is meant to tick boxes for ABDLs and if you guys are happy, then the story is successful.