Recent Comments

1/28/23, 6:35 PM
Damn. All those new rules were hot ! Too bad we didn't get to play with them much. At this point I'm rooting for his uncle to win. Haha Definitely very interesting and unique way of making a conflict for the protagonist. I hope whatever the ending is, we still get to play with all the hunky hairy men ;) Thanks for writing ! <3

1/29/23, 3:34 AM
@[NZcontroller](/user/show/23780) I'm actually hoping that Barry wins, but in the process becomes corrupted into just as perverted as Paul. So, retaining his free will but with an imprint of Paul's desires reorienting him and changing his priorities.
Oct 10, 2022
1/29/23, 3:25 AM
If I had to pick the best story on this entire site, this would be it. Holy shit.
Nutiper
1/29/23, 3:10 AM
The fact that Detective Carrington pulled a fast one over the Cumslayer by virtue of a tiny pistol hidden deep inside Carrington's ass (and which he needed the help of a himbo to fetch out) gives me *all* sorts of ideas for my next party trick at my family's Thanksgiving dinners, *waahooo*โ€” Also, the fact that the tongue-in-cheek commentary on hypnosis kink ends up being a *plot point* leading Carrington to deducing the identity of the Cumslayer is very, very funny. I am eager as always for the next chapter, and sad that it will be the final one. This story is a delight.
Chad
1/29/23, 2:49 AM
Need moreโ€ฆi have been waiting for the sequel to the first chapter and it did not disappoint. busted twice.. reminiscent of straight to bitch club 10/10
Nov 15, 2022
1/29/23, 2:06 AM
I will forever wait for a new chapter of this series, it was that good :(
1/29/23, 1:15 AM
Please do a conversion story into a team rocket grunt ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป
1/29/23, 12:28 AM
Wow charlie, you knew I'd like this one, I saw a lot parallels to my relationship with my bf. Keep up the good work, Adam going to thank you because now I have to go pump a load in him๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ†๐Ÿ’ฆ๐Ÿ’ฆ
Anonymous
1/28/23, 11:46 PM
Would live a part 2
1/28/23, 11:46 PM
Oh wow,this took an interesting turn!
dmc
1/28/23, 11:27 PM
Great start...