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1/13/23, 6:24 PM
Your stories are so fucking hot.
Sep 22, 2019
1/13/23, 5:38 PM
Martin Please, please don't feel bad. I have start so many stories on notepad and keep thinking to much a story of some one else.. So I stop. I have so many unfinished stories, too. It's as if every time I start to think about one, start typing. The phone rings or some other interruption. Pull my pants up and never get back to it. Life is always in the way it seems. Then Like you some new idea, new start to a story. start it and one page done, now stop thinking of what way to go. Remove my hank from the key board. Move to other things. I have a bad habit of not complete ding one thing be for I start and other. Right now I got 10+ repairs, mostly electronics, I do that kink of work. I to need to fix that too. Get one done be for i take apart some think else. Let's do what we can. Thank You for all you have done. All great from my point of view.
8/19/22, 6:06 AM
Is this still in the works? Will there be a conclusion?

1/13/23, 4:09 PM
@[Anima](/user/show/929667) Yes I have just been swept up by the winds of life and working on planning the next chapter and trying to keep all the world building lore straight. It’ll take some time but more parts will come out soon.
1/13/23, 7:11 AM
Another great chapter, took a longtime to read to the end but well worth it, with the twits and turns liked in the end that Overflow, is getting off on the acts he is doing. " **_Overflow had willingly pressed that button and that had excited him! - The power! The freedom! - The cruelty he could commit!"_** and maybe Blur, who has been programmed to follow Overflow (as a good boy) will become the same way

1/13/23, 2:38 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Thank you! I'm glad you found it a good read! The Heroes in the story are past the point of redemption now. Even Blur, whose only conditioning right now is to be a dumb follower of Overflow, has come to realize his darker desires. How he plans to act on that is up to your imagination,...
1/13/23, 6:09 AM
Man, this chapter had so many twists and turns I love it. This was the last chapter right?

1/13/23, 2:29 PM
@[Anon529373](/user/show/541335) Yes, this is the end for now. I was thinking about adding an epilogue at the bottom to tidy things up, but things were already getting long. Glad you enjoyed things!
Aug 17, 2019
Dylan
1/13/23, 12:59 PM
Short but hot, Joey and his powers should be in more stories! I like the pic too, but why dont you use the pic link on top of the page to put it in with the text? ( Check my stories if u want to see if you like the way it turns out)
1/13/23, 12:45 PM
Very hot for your first story. Looking forward to more
1/13/23, 12:07 PM
Really nice story, very sexy, really excited for more but they are a few errors from time to time and what point where I had to re-read three time to understand what was being said: "because they’re want you wanted" Did you mean "because they're *what* you wanted"?
nycboot
1/13/23, 11:55 AM
Took me a while to realize that Hvalla is an anagram of Valhalla. Each time I read a chapter I am so thankful that you are back, M.Greene!
1/13/23, 9:53 AM
this was incredibly hot, love his feminine moaning