Recent Comments

12/29/22, 12:33 PM
I'm right with Edlam, I loved the first chapter of your story, and am very much looking forward to reading where you take it. It was fun to read and I'd hazard to guess, fun to write it too.

12/29/22, 5:48 PM
@[stephenhh](/user/show/1131578) Thank you, it was a fun time to write! I am currently doing final edits on Chapter 2, I'm hoping to get it on the site by the end of the week!
12/29/22, 5:39 PM
Excellent sequel. I can't wait to see how the next parts will go!
12/29/22, 4:40 PM
Hoping for a part 2, as the condition progresses!! I also love the clinical professional & nature of Dr. Carson. It’s an interesting juxtaposition to the craven & animalistic Impulses of the characters afflicted with JPS. Unique on this site. Bravo!
Grieyson
12/29/22, 4:23 PM
That was super hot! I can't wait for more
12/29/22, 4:14 PM
Congratulations Mr. Peterson, what a cunning idea to master this Martianman Hunter, talented with SO many possibilities. Also I like the idea to use Bruce's view, voice or Alfreds for voyeuristic and manipulating exercise of power. Well written on top, I would wish you would continue writing as I just discovered this site. Thanks for posting!
12/29/22, 4:10 PM
Love this! Can’t wait to see where this goes. Great job with your first story!
Martin
12/29/22, 2:31 PM
One should be disgusted about this story, but my hard dick says otherwise. And who am I to argue with my dick?
Anonymous
12/29/22, 2:19 PM
This is awesome, can't wait for more!
12/29/22, 2:17 PM
One thing that would be interesting would be see the parents and teachers calling for a meeting for them to find out what to do with the dogs, only for them to pull a prank that turns everyone in the meeting into canines too, and after the orgy, the Doberman principal says they need too ensure the whole school is turned, and gets back into being fucked by the Rottweiler coach
12/26/22, 4:58 PM
Very fun and sexy. Nice progression!

12/29/22, 1:38 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks, it’s good to get feedback.