Recent Comments

1/10/23, 6:31 PM
The first paragraph is lovely. I enjoy hearing about settings, and you do great with evocative physicality and sensuality here. "Jazz music sawing through the air..." But this doesn't distract, of course, from the narrative and your usual humor and knack for voices. It's a good thing "Noir" didn't end up being the next contest prompt -- there wouldn't have been sporting competition!
1/10/23, 5:27 PM
uh oh... where'd you go? I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter! I love your stories
1/9/23, 7:05 AM
My man this was a masterpiece. I'm so happy I threw the "shapeshifter" tag out there on a whim. Bravo!

1/10/23, 2:57 PM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) Aw, thanks, man! It gave me some moments of challenge but I think it turned out, so thanks for the inspiration. :)
Anonymous
1/10/23, 11:47 AM
This was an amazing story, very creative and unique, I absolutely loved it. Can I say, I know that it had a great and natural ending but I can see more happening too - there's some great places this story could go if you ever decided that Dennis and his nerds deserved another adventure :) Amazing read, thank you so much.
Renten
1/10/23, 9:11 AM
The moment we got all those juicy descriptions of Mr. Wallace...we know. It's slime time babyyyyyyyy Thanks for the update! The writing is as hot as always 🔥🔥🔥
Fatbabysage
1/10/23, 7:33 AM
this is my new abdl bible. Everything is perfect and i for one would love to grow to be a daddy
1/10/23, 4:20 AM
I made an account just so I could praise this story, it's charming, cute, sexy, what's not to love? Please keep writing :)
1/10/23, 3:21 AM
Always a pleasure to read your stories! I must say, my favorite part was the foot fetish sculpture of Alex with his feet on top while he smelled and fuck his shoes <3
1/10/23, 2:18 AM
Another hot chapter! I love all the cowboy boots and swapping in this! Adding sneakers to it is even hotter! can’t wait to read the next one!
1/10/23, 12:44 AM
This is a superbly written and hot piece. Your characters have a very real, appealing quality to them that made this one of the better stories I've read in a while. Definitely grade-A material.