Recent Comments

11/29/25, 5:20 PM
Wonderful series. The pace was perfect for each chapter and enough resistance as to make it credible. Well done indeed!
11/29/25, 5:16 PM
Fantastic final chapter. One of the best stories I’ve read in some time.
11/29/25, 2:19 PM
I am such a fan of all the references to smells... the musky, the real smells of men. SO NICE. Well done!
pmk
11/29/25, 2:10 PM
This was an incredible series! So hot and well-written. Hope to read more of your work in the future.
11/29/25, 12:14 PM
Absolutely fantastic.
11/29/25, 9:36 AM
For some reason my messages aren't showing up. (Maybe we can correspond here) or via email?
Oct 4, 2025
11/29/25, 5:23 AM
god you are the best writer on this site.
11/28/25, 2:44 PM
It's good to see a character that is not a plain psychopath. He has wants and needs. He is having fun but he is not being cruel. Thanks for writing!

11/29/25, 2:26 AM
@[BrGuy](/user/show/10033894) My pleasure, and thanks for reading!
11/28/25, 11:33 PM
Hi, where did you write to me? Can I have the address? I just didn't receive anything.

Nico's Beef Co
11/29/25, 1:54 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) I clicked on your profile and dmed on the forum
11/28/25, 9:31 AM
I rarely comment, but your story is just awesome. The idea of the brainwashing already happened is absolutely genius and now that battle that takes place between each side fighting for Max, is just chefs kiss. As reader of this less sexual but way more erotic story, I'm asking about the background of Thomas and Colby. For now the characters seem a little underdeveloped and all is focusing on Max, at least they dont get the same attention as Max. For Colby and Max' teammates, that might be okay, as they're side characters, but it would be interesting to read more about their background too. Overall this story is chef's kiss and I am really looking forward to see how you have planned to end it. At this point, I have great sympathy for Max and Colby's plan. Good work! Thanks for sharing it

11/28/25, 7:18 PM
@[JasonB2](/user/show/10042798) Mostly because at one point I’d planned on a second book where Maximus goes with colby to the ranch and we learn more there. But I never did it. I got discouraged at how poorly this did and kinda let it sit for quite a few months. It’s been done since June. Just. Kinda gave up. But I decided to let people see it.

11/29/25, 1:23 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) "But I decided to let people see it." GOOD! Because it is a great story! -_-